Falling Up Part 5

[emi_h]

Part Five - Prove Me Wrong

“Are you sure we weren’t supposed to bring something?”

“For the last time, Nicky, Bobby told me not to bring anything.  They have everything covered, don’t worry.”

“It just seems a little rude that we’re showing up empty handed.”

“We’re not empty

Comments

[tanisafan]

Hee! Loved this one! This chapter was a bit of a rollercoaster ride of emotions, and I kept feeling really bad for poor Nick. Boy, was he having a bad day ;). (And I do not like Ryan. I can see where he's coming from, but still, lol!)
I particularly liked the little details you put into this, like the fact that Grissom was surprised by the news about Nick and Greg, but focused primarily on the crime scene.
And yay for that last scene! I'm really enjoying this story, I'll be waiting for the next bit!

[wojo62]

this was a emotional chapter, I felt bad for Nick but I knew Greg would be back. Looking forward to more.

[midnight_tene]

I just finished reading this on my phone, and it's so good! I can't wait for the next installment, I was sitting there soaking my bowls & plates , on this rollercoaster from part one to this really sweet scene!

Ohh and the use of boyfriend at the end, showing that they are still together *dies*

and the teddibear!!