Comments | nicalyse: it wasn't going to be okay

nicalyse

it wasn't going to be okay

Jul 29, 2012 19:01

Title: it wasn't going to be okay
Pairing: Stefan/Caroline
Warnings: Angst. Sex.
Summary: "I'm leaving town and I think you should come with me." For softly_me at her waxing poetic comment ficathon.
Disclaimer: Not mine.
Note: This is for the darkship table prompt it's just skin.

( Caroline comes home one night covered in blood and dirt, just walks through the back door into the kitchen with bare feet and dry eyes. )

fanfic: stefan/caroline, drabble, meme: darkship prompt table, character: caroline forbes, fanfic: the vampire diaries, character: stefan salvatore

Comments 8

fluffyfrolicker July 30 2012, 23:46:31 UTC

Love it. Because there's not much hope at the end of the tunnel and "We never do," Stefan lies" IS AN AMAZING LINE.

nicalyse August 1 2012, 00:15:59 UTC

Oh, thank you!

Because there's not much hope at the end of the tunnel

Is it twisted that that's exactly why I enjoyed writing this so much? Because there's never an end when you live forever, and you never get relief from your base instincts. It's so dreary and angsty and fun to write. :P

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nicalyse August 1 2012, 00:17:07 UTC

Thank you so much! I very much enjoy self-aware!Stefan, so that line is a favorite of mine as well. :)

lint138 July 31 2012, 01:07:35 UTC

Well written in both style and tone. The characters were spot on, and you could almost feel the atmosphere they created for themselves. Lovely.

nicalyse August 1 2012, 00:18:21 UTC

Thank you for your lovely comment! I do enjoy torturing them. ;)

toemonster August 5 2012, 03:48:19 UTC

jesus this was beautiful. you should write them always and forever my god.

nicalyse August 5 2012, 16:24:26 UTC

Aw, thank you! I'm so happy you liked it!

zodiac_sign November 30 2013, 10:42:32 UTC

Great job!