That the Moon Elbowed the Stars 15/17

[nicalyse]

Title: That the Moon Elbowed the Stars
Chapter: 15/17
Rating: R
Pairing: Puck/Rachel
Word Count: 7,650
Summary: And maybe it's an awful thing to think, but he wonders what's worse for her, losing New York or losing her dad.
Disclaimer: Not mine.

Comments

[breadtana]

Eeee, so exciting! Haha, I really hope he chooses New York :p Mmm, but when he called to tell her that he forgave her... so, so good. I really love this story and I can't believe there's only 2 chapters left! I can't wait for them though :)

[nicalyse]

Thank you so much for the comment!

[lost_n_stereo]

Favorite chapter so far! I love that Rachel is always in Puck's mind whether he wants her there or not, like in always checking the vegan options on a menu. Can't wait to read the next chapter!

[nicalyse]

Aw, thank you so much! I'm glad you're enjoying the story!

[omniasol]

MILLIEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE.
i now have a permanent vision of my favorite girl in my favorite show. thank you, thank you, thank you.

that said, i missed a lot of the beginning of this story because i wasn't in a good place to read the sad parts, so i've sort of picked up in the middle, but your world-building for them is impeccable. like, it's so believable that this is them and who they are.
the "i forgive you" was gorgeous.

[omniasol]

also, i discovered this video of lea singing "not for the life of me" and i felt like people reading this should see it if they don't know the show/how rachel would fit into it. i'm realizing now that millie/rachel are v. similar in their backgrounds and it is glorious.
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=HmYBM6lEaKY&feature=player_embedded

[nicalyse]

Rachel would be a rather wonderful Millie, and I'm so glad that it was detail you liked! (I watched the video too, and she is lovely there.)

I tried to balance the rather heavy angst with some really nice moments for both of them, and I'm glad you're enjoying the story now! Thanks for commenting!

[smc_27]

I just love you, okay? That is all.

[nicalyse]

♥

[nicalyse]

Thank you so much for commenting!