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FIC: Something Beautiful - Teddy/Dominique

Dec 06, 2011 11:54

Title: Something Beautiful
Creator: magic_knickers
Prompt Number: #84
Rating: PG-13
Pairing/characters: Teddy/Dominique, Teddy/Victoire, Scorpius/Rose
Warnings/content: Highlight to read *language, mentions of sex*
Medium or word count: 2223
Summary: This is not happening.
Notes: Thank you to my beta xxx_angelin_xxx!
Disclaimer: Harry Potter belongs to JK Rowling. All works ( Read more... )

fic: pairing: teddy/dominique, fic: length: 1-5k, *2011

Comments 9

nerak_rose December 6 2011, 14:56:13 UTC

Oh, Dom, the mess you got yourself into. Teddy looks like he could use a little kick in the backside too. Well written. I enjoyed it.

magic_knickers January 5 2012, 02:22:08 UTC

I'd say they both kind of screwed up here. Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed.

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magic_knickers January 5 2012, 02:22:37 UTC

Poor Victoire is right. :/
Thank you for reading. :)

doobb December 7 2011, 21:58:37 UTC

this was really good, i liked it, short and simple yet it was straight to the point, funny too, like in the beginning with dominique waking up and then realising some stuff and all, i dunno i found it funny, dont mind my weird sense of humour :p but it was sad at the same time eh, i really liked it and poor victoire at the end aw, i felt bad XD and yes, that was bad from teddy and dom but well, shit happens /and this one wasn't a good one/ XDDD

magic_knickers January 5 2012, 02:23:19 UTC

I'm glad you thought it was funny! Thank you so much! I'm happy you liked it. :)

bluemermaid December 9 2011, 22:17:12 UTC

Aw, that's really sad, poor Victoire. I do really like your Dom, though, she feels very real. I'm kind of upset that this ends where it did, because I want to know what happens next!! You wrote the characters so well, I've been drawn into this world and I need more, haha. I hope everything works out okay for them!

magic_knickers January 5 2012, 02:24:01 UTC

Thank you! I hadn't really thought about continuing, but it's a thought. I'm glad you like it. :)

kawasakininja December 26 2011, 11:52:19 UTC

Christ, what a terrible and sad situation for everybody :( Victoire especially, but I couldn't help but feel bad for Dom and even Teddy giving Dom his puppy eyes at the table. It made me curious for Teddy and Victoire's side of the story, have they've been having relationship issuses even before, did Teddy possibly have a crush on 'less than perfect sister', so many questions! But I really enjoyed your Dom, she felt very real and human.

magic_knickers January 5 2012, 02:25:08 UTC

Thank you! I'm glad you liked Dom...I didn't want her to be a boyfriend-snatching hussy or something equally unlikeable, yeah?