FIC: A Demonstration of Christmas Spirit - James/Albus

Dec 27, 2011 12:11

Title: A Demonstration of Christmas Spirit
Creator: kitty_fic
Prompt Number: 43
Rating: NC-17
Pairing/characters: James/Albus
Warnings/content: Highlight to read *incest, slight dubcon?*
Medium or word count: 3300
Summary: How do Slytherins prove their Christmas Spirit and get the gift they really want? *Beware candy canes, eggnog and mistletoe! Albus is out to ( Read more... )

fic: pairing: albus/james, fic: length: 1-5k, *2011

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freakingcrups December 27 2011, 11:00:26 UTC
So much to say....

1. That was some brilliant artwork from Thilia, right? When I saw it as one of the prompts, I was so excited to read the story that would accompany it for this fest and here it is! So thank you for taking this prompt and wow, you didn't disappoint!

2. Where do I even start? I love the interactions between the boys. They bicker like typical brothers and I just love how you've created the relationship between them. I absolutely love how Albus takes the challenge even though James didn't specify it as a bet/challenge.

3. Albus. Guh, what a sneaky little Slytherin. I love his techniques in getting his brother's attention. Candy cane? Brilliant. Eggnog? BRILLIANT. Mistletoe? Just spectacular. I love how you've created him as a character and I can't help but love him.

4. James. I love how he is trying so hard to resist! As the reader, you can tell just how badly he wants Albus and how hard it is for him to resist his little brother. Just...excellent writing.

Overall, the story was hot and damn adorable at the same time! Thank you so much for such a good read ;)

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kitty_fic January 14 2012, 00:22:38 UTC
I couldn't have done it without you!
You're so awesome with your awesome comment bb! <3

And yes! thilia amazes me! I really wanted to write this because it was that art that made me love this pair! She has a tendency to do that! Her art is always convincing me to love new pairings xD

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