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Fic: My Virgin Eyes! - Teddy/James

Dec 19, 2011 09:27

Title: My Virgin Eyes!
Creator: flaminia_x
Prompt Number: 93
Rating: PG-13/light R
Pairing/characters: Teddy/James Sirius, Remus/Sirius
Warnings/content: Highlight to read *None, I think, other than a brief mention of man-parts*
Medium or word count: c.2900
Summary: ″Moony, your … offspring is buggering my grandson!″
Notes: Oh my goodness, I couldn't ( Read more... )

fic: length: 1-5k, fic: pairing: teddy/james, *2011

Comments 21

maevemist December 19 2011, 09:47:00 UTC

This is brilliant! So very funny and lighthearted and it makes my fangirl heart full of gleeful squee.

So much love!

One of my favourite things is a nod to Remus/Sirius in my Teddy/James and this isn't so much of a nod as it is a full body bow so, thank you very much for sharing. :)

flaminia_x January 10 2012, 14:38:44 UTC

So glad you enjoyed it!! I do love R/S, so when I see a Teddy/next-gen pairing, I think they sort of mimic their elders, yeah? I'm glad this made the cut as a next-gen fic, given that there's very little T/J in here, but it was a lot of fun to write. :)

nerak_rose December 19 2011, 09:58:32 UTC

Eeeh! :DI laughed so so so much while reading this; it's sheer brilliance. ♥ You got the Marauders down spot on and Teddy and James II were lovely as well, echoing their forefathers. So many great oneliners too, I couldn't possibly pick my favourite - though I chortled at the 'moony show us your stretchies' one. xD

flaminia_x January 10 2012, 14:39:20 UTC

Hahah - thanks so much! I can definitely see R/S and the other marauders being excellently skilled at punnery, so that comes through in my writing, hopefully. :) I'm really glad you liked it!

nerak_rose January 10 2012, 18:43:37 UTC

i loved it <3 thanks for writing it. :)

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flaminia_x January 10 2012, 14:40:17 UTC

Haha - yes, poor James indeed, but hopefully he is a bit happier knowing that he will win Lily over! :) Glad you liked it!

secretsolitaire December 19 2011, 14:48:35 UTC

This is fun! Nice banter among the Marauders.

flaminia_x January 10 2012, 14:40:30 UTC

Thanks so much! Glad you liked it. :)

hellusbellus December 19 2011, 20:09:45 UTC

Bahahaha. Oh, lovely. Lovely, lovely. This made me giggle and smile. My favorite bit was probably James (I) running around in circles screaming about Lily. Well done, you!

flaminia_x January 10 2012, 14:40:41 UTC

Haha - thanks!! Glad you enjoyed it!