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We found a stowaway fic! Due to circumstances, two fics were written for sparklynoodles and the writer of this fic has graciously agreed to let us post it as an awesome bonus fic.

ENJOY THE EXTRA BOOTY!

Gift fic for: sparklynoodles
From: newsficcon

Title: Whispers in the Morning
Rating: NC-17
Pairing: KoyamaPi, RyoUchi, TegoMass
Warnings: vampires (+ pets), bloodplay, dubious

Comments

[sparklynoodles]

First of all, this fic left me laughing, flustered with how hot it was AND smiling at the fluffy parts. It's hard to incite all three emotions in me from one fic, so congrats on that- it was a perfect balance of everything. If you see my icon, that's how I am right now *dances and flails*

AND FUCK YEAH VAMPIRES

I would like to quote everything, but that would hardly be efficient. So here are my favourite parts!

First of all the title. LOLOLOL forever. And the cut text ;___;
He’s not even lost, at least not technically; as a mindless wanderer, he never stays in the same place for too long. This, too, shall be temporary.
I love this. It sets a wonderful preface for the experience that follows and really characterizes Koyama in a quick way that helps me understand him right away.

And I love how you included the mom and cat ;__; Of course that'd be the only things Koyama misses, lol.

Your Uchi is hilarious and cute, I love his pink velvet robe and how he's all huffy at Koyama being dirty.

“No need.” Uchi gives a half-smirk. “They sleep like the dead.”

I love what a smart-ass Uchi is here.

disappears into the hallway in a flash of hot-pink velvet

I can't even with the hot-pink velvet. I giggle, but it would be something he'd love.

And the description of the bathroom sounds so pretty *__*

He’s asleep in no time at all, his aching muscles soothed by the covers like it’s a human glove. He dreams of colorful spirits all around him, chasing him, seducing him; his dream self easily gives in, like he always does, and Koyama wonders if this is all supposed to mean something. It’s a much stronger feeling this time, his nerves on edge as he slowly gains consciousness, and the first thing he notices is that the soft strokes to his face are real.

I love this section, the description of him falling into sleep. ugh.

“Good evening,” someone whispers, and Koyama opens his eyes to another cute face grinning down at him. “Your single eyelids are really nice looking.”

LOL OUT OF NOWHERE TEGO <3

And aww...I loved the KoyaTego primping and bonding section with Koyama doing his hair and lotioning him like he's a pet. Tegoshi's so cute here.

Uchi laughs. “You are so helpless. How does Masuda-sama stand you?”

“I wonder,” Tegoshi replies, his tone implying he knows exactly why.

LMFAO this made me crack up.

And I love the little details, like Uchi with his face mask and Tegoshi being spoiled and their robe colours.

Nggghh, your description of Yamapi is hot.

They focus on Koyama and Koyama feels a jolt of energy, like something only Yamashita can trigger inside him. “Hello.”

ME GUSTA.

And the Uchi and Pi banter is cute. Really, I love how all the characters interact in here (even invisible Shige, lol).

“Say it,” Yamashita hisses, and Koyama’s blood runs hot.

“Vampire,” he spits out, feeling silly and juvenile just speaking the word, but the corners of Yamashita’s mouth turn up into a pleased smile.

This reminded me of the scene in Twilight and I LOL'ed but then you have to follow it with Yamapi being all awed at Koyama's arms and I'm going all *___* It's SO CONFUSING.

This Shige character has really left him in shambles.

BUAHAHAHA.

[sparklynoodles]

PART TWO OF THE MADNESS

Every now and then Uchi’s body would visibly jolt, which has Ryo groaning as he thrusts into him harder. It’s beyond the realm of any porno Koyama has ever seen before, his face heating up as he realizes how turned on he’s getting just from watching.

*__________________________* that is all

so Koyama pays attention to the way Ryo licks up the blood he’s spilled onto Uchi’s neck. His fangs shine in the artificial light as Uchi stretches his neck, his noises turning into obscene moans as Ryo reaches a hand around his waist to pump his cock.

dfegewgewgewgewlkjgdslgjljewiewwefewfewfwe ------^__________^___________

“Fucker always passes out the first time,” he says, almost apologetically.

LMFAO I love how Uchi is so fluffy yet fierce and Ryo's so doting on him.

but then he’s tucked safely into Yamashita’s side with a strong arm around him.

AW PI DOESN'T WANT TO SHARE :3

Awww....TOMO ;____; that's so cute.

There’s no one to be found, the bed perfectly made,

Of course Massu the Vampire keeps his space neat and tidy. OFC.

Yamashita’s fingers are absently stroking his throat, and it may as well be his cock for how strongly he’s reacting to it.

I love how the feeding and vampirism part of it is so strongly tied to sex, but not in a vulgar and gross way, in a very sensual and luxe way. Very Anne Rice.

Massu's SO POLITE. It's so cute.

Yamashita’s eyes glow red and it’s the single most terrifying and arousing thing Koyama’s ever seen in his life, his hips automatically grinding down against Yamashita at the first flick of a tongue to his fingertip. “Mm, you taste good.”

“Yeah?” Koyama replies, leaning down to press his lips to Yamashita’s, tasting the tang of his own blood on Yamashita’s tongue. Then Yamashita’s hands clamp down on his hips and rock them purposefully together, low grunts swallowed by Koyama as the temperature rises between them.

DEAD. OMG. I AM DEAD. THAT PART. ngghhhhhh

FOLLOWED BY THIS PART OMG I CAN'T

He cuts himself off by pressing his face against Koyama’s chest, and Koyama has a brief flash of panic as he feels fangs puncture his skin. It’s just below his collarbone, but he still feels the blood leave him in a rush of energy. The last thing he registers is an orgasm that feels like it actually blows his mind as everything goes black.

And awwwwwww at his list of pets. ;___;

“I went a little too far,” Yamashita admits, and Ryo shakes his head. “Open up, Koyama-kun.”

Koyama follows orders and finds rice being shoveled in his mouth, chewing slowly before swallowing and looking to Yamashita for more.

HE IS FEEDING HIM OMG THIS IS SO CUTE I AM GETTING CAVITIES ;______________;

At one point he opens his eyes and finds Tegoshi making faces at him, which has him smiling as he snuggles closer to Yamashita

Tegoshi is such a brat. I LOVE IT. I love how bratty he is and how indulgent Massu is.

“I do,” he says, blinking up at Yamashita who’s gazing down at him. “I have never felt so important to anyone until tonight.”

And it’s true. All throughout his journey, Koyama has been alone. That’s the way he wanted it. Everyone he met along the way, even the ones he let into his bed, they were all temporary. He helped out when there was something for him to do, but it wasn’t dire. They didn’t need him.

Gorgeous, simply gorgeous. This is what made me love this fic so much, is the fact that they need each other.

[sparklynoodles]

PART THREE WHY THE FUCK NOT

AND THEN UNF THEY DECIDE TO JUST FUCK RIGHT THERE. *__*

This whole sex scene, I'm not sure whether to be aroused or feel the fluffy, which I love how you perfectly balanced the two.

What he feels is more than sex, more than love, his life seeming to bleed right out of him into Yamashita despite his skin remaining intact. It’s so intense that he almost comes, with absolutely no stimulation to his cock, this type of arousal on a completely new level. Then Yamashita snaps his hips and Koyama cries out, the physical and spiritual forces combining between them as Yamashita’s mouth finally closes in on Koyama’s throat.

I love that passage above. LOVELOVELOVELOVE

“Please don’t leave me,” Yamashita whispers into his neck, just above the bandage, and Koyama uses the last of his effort to shake his head.

That's so. fucking. cute.

“I’m home,” he whispers into Yamashita’s sleeping face. “Finally.”

Perfect ending <3<3

[ryogrande]

/rolls in quotes, bitch i burst out laughing at the ":o vampire" part because yes twilight and i had to troll you somehow.

glad you liked it tho, it was oddly fun to write. ♥