Gift fic for arashijun
Gift fic for: arashijun
From: newsficcon
Title: Unspoken
Rating: PG-13
Pairing: RyoShige, with appearances by Koyama, Massu and Tegoshi
Warnings: None. (It’s a mix of genres. It has a tiny bit angst (as in frustration) and quite some humour in it :D )
Summary: It’s been five years since Shige and Ryo broke up. Now Ryo is a famous singer and Shige a beloved ( Read more... )
From: newsficcon
Title: Unspoken
Rating: PG-13
Pairing: RyoShige, with appearances by Koyama, Massu and Tegoshi
Warnings: None. (It’s a mix of genres. It has a tiny bit angst (as in frustration) and quite some humour in it :D )
Summary: It’s been five years since Shige and Ryo broke up. Now Ryo is a famous singer and Shige a beloved ( Read more... )
I wandered over to see which fic comment it was that you were commenting back on and the feels all returned to me!!!
*sigh* but yes coherency, I have it now, so I will comment properly (I also know that you will get the message too, commenting to an anon writer is hard sometimes, because you don't know if your thoughts will actually reach them). I honestly love how you constructed this. The slow lead up into the story, fully expressing the torment in Shige's heart over what was. How no matter the amount of time that passed he could never forget. So tragic.
And then comes the mysterious box of letters!! The way all three of them (shige, massu and koyama) interacted while reading the letters was priceless. Haha Massu continuing to read while shige's going beet red and scrambling for the letter. How they all read about the better then sex cake and without even writing it you could see the whole scene, the moment they went silent after and all looked at each other thinking the exact same thing. And then the fact that ryo was trolling in his letters, hahaha and the cut your hair song OMG!! hahaha
In the whole story, the character with the most life was the character that wasn't even present for the majority of it. Im holding myself back from re-reading it right now cause I have to sleep. I'm in awe at how beautifully you pulled it off XD
haha I apologise about the long comment, I get excited when I find amazing fics like this one ^^
Your writing is magical, I'm going to go ahead and hug you again now *hugs again*
Reply
Thanks so much for your awesome comment!! <3
You know, I'm not exactly confident when it's about writing Nishikato, so I was very nervous about this. I only wrote them a very few times and... ages ago. But arashijun is a Nishikato fan, so I gave it a try.^^ I'm so relieved it turned out well!!!! <3
Reply
Leave a comment