Gift fic for rockthecliche

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Gift fic for: rockthecliche
From: newsficcon

Title: Shadow
Rating: PG-13
Pairing: RyoMassu
Warnings: Witchcraft
Summary: After leaving home, Massu is in a new town where he needs to figure out what his calling in life is.
Notes: I hope you like this! I tried very hard to put in what I thought you would enjoy.

Comments

[rockthecliche]

ahhhhhhhhhhhhh *_______*

i was totally intrigued by you saying that there was witchcraft in this, because it's such a broad term, and so when i clicked the cut text i was already thinking, "what kind of witchcraft are we talking?" and i can't even, i LOVE that this is just...the most basic and most traditional of forms with broomsticks and everything. XD and i love that massu is bad at flying -- i mean, i can't blame him -- and how he's just like, "...can't i stay home?" and really adorable!

i loved tegoshi. i just. i loved tegoshi. i loved that even though it was such a brief mention, you could really tell how close he and massu were and i adore their friendship to the ends of the earth, and that was just a really lovely touch. ♥

i was really hoping that the person ended up staying with was koyama because he's just...koyama. so adorable and cute and just...everything that i imagined koyama to be in another life! sweet and endearing and utterly helpful but a little snarky, though completely clueless at times, lol. and i love that shige is there but not actually there, and he would be off somewhere being all intelligent. pfft. oh shige. you can't fool us. you can't even fool RYO, and that's saying something. XD

speaking of ryo -- lol he's ridiculous. though his reaction to massu telling him about the flying would probably be on par with what my reaction would be, not gonna lie. XD he's a perfect mix of snark and shy, two things that define him to his core, really, and it's really nice how he and massu sort of fall into this weird unspoken maybe-like thing, and omg i grinned like a loon when he made gyoza for massu and much feelings were felt, lol. the ending is perfect -- i know how awkward they are so just having them sort of be there for each other and massu letting him in on a secret and taking it from there was just...perfect. XD;; thank you so much, this was such a joy to read and i loved it! thank you thank you THANK YOU ♥

[luna_truths]

:O best comment ever, hello there.

I'm soooo glad you liked it. It took me a while to figure out just what to write you, but then I fell in love with the magic AU you had on your sign up and... this was born. I tried super hard to add in everything I thought you might like, and I really am happy to see you enjoyed it. :D

<3