Gift fic for pinkpapyrus

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Gift fic for: pinkpapyrus
From: newsficcon

Title: With Love
Rating: PG
Pairing: RyoPi, TegoShige
Warnings: Should I warn for traces of magick? And also some fluff and sap >_>
Summary: AU. Love is hard enough to come by without a little nudge, even for those that do the nudging.
Notes: News owns a magick bakery AU. Sorry for the fail summary, the idea for this

Comments

[pinkpapyrus]

Awww, Anon-san, this is adorable.

It was an old technique, one that was nearly lost as people evolved and emotions changed, but they had managed to preserve it and share the ancient art

This premise fascinates me! I've seen it in scifi and fantasy books and I've always loved seeing emotions being sold as tangible products, so whee! :D

The little details of RyoPi's relationship made me smile, too. ♥ I love the images you put in of how they act together.

And the last part with Tegoshi like, "I'm supposed to help." XDDDD All vague and Tegoshi-like. ♥

Thank you so much, Anon-san! I love fics that make me go "n'aawww." :D

[miss_jelly]

I'm so very glad you liked it, I was nervous since I really like your writing and didn't want to disappoint XD; I am also really glad you enjoyed the premise, I'd had the idea for a while, but didn't really know what to do with it, thank you for giving me the opportunity :)

[sanjihan]

Oh my goodness!!!!! THIS IS SO WARM AND FUZZY. omg I don't have words. XD The RyoPi was utterly adorable but Shige was SO CUTE and THE PREMISE..... MADE WITH LOVE <33333333333333 I'm sorry. I'm making no sense but it was SO MUCH FUN. Koyama freaking Shige out with his super sappy (and SO totally them) answer. I squealed like the KoyaShige fangirl I am at it and did a little dance.

He drifts off wondering if annoyance is another form of love and ends up waking with the faint taste of cherries on his tongue.
I LAUGHED SO HARD. ahahaha. <3 <3 And awwwwwwwww I see what you did there. Tegoshi + Shige love = cherries and Tego was adding the cherries to the strawberry cake and the cherry tart at the end awwwww.

He thinks back to the Tegoshi from then, sweet and cautious. He was afraid of stepping on toes, back then, getting in the way. Looking at him now, so much has changed, but then so much hasn't.
MY LITTLE FANGIRL HEART. I literally "d'awwwwwwwww"d. So precious. And then "I didn't it found me." <333333333333

[miss_jelly]

X3 your review made me really happy, hahaha. I'm very glad you like it! Lol for some reason I wanted to add in the cherries, mostly because it reminded me of Shige's cherry boy underwear XD; Thank you very very much for the comment, it made me smile :)

[kaminikaku]

this was as sweet as their bakery products I imagine..loved the details, loved Shige's quest, and loved the idea that each of the members were supportive and understanding and they all contributed to the whole....it seemed like a perfectly balanced recipe. the last paragraph is adorable.

[miss_jelly]

thanks so much for reading and commenting, I'm happy you enjoyed it :)

[carmine_pink]

NEWS magick bakery AU is something I never knew I wanted until now. So sweet! I loved their individual descriptions:

There were six of them, each as dedicated to their work as the next- Masuda with the smile that warmed the coldest of hearts, Yamashita with his simple charm and concentration (despite not liking cakes, himself), Koyama’s caring nature, Tegoshi’s impossible sweetness, even Ryo with his poison tongue could make treats to lift your spirit. And then there was him, Shige, who could only cook fish and was the master of fake smiles.
LOL, of course Shige would be the one unable to make cakes. And oblivious to all the hints that he should talk to Tegoshi. XD

Cakes made with looove. <3 Such a wonderful premise and lovely fic. Thank you!

[miss_jelly]

glad to have been of service XD thanks so much for reading and commenting!