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This comment is embarrassingly long I am sorry (except not sorry at all I LOVE YOU) yararanger September 6 2010, 20:57:48 UTC
I.

K.GJFDBGJDFGJSDJKGHJKDFJKHGSDKJF

I wrote this comment as a .txt while reading so there are very definite moments of OMG reactions and so on so I have no doubt that this comment will break the character limits (for which I apologise in advance). THIS WAS AMAZING OMG. OMG. SERIOUSLY. I spazzed at a friend via twitter while reading this and nearly broke something inside me flailing so much and trying not to shriek and joygasm all over the place (since I am staying with family and they would not appreciate it).

Um.

*pastes*

1) RYOMASSU SKBGSKHJDV;AGOKSLDGFIGLSIDVDVILYDRGVI;BDEIRFYURUG RYOMASSU RYOMASSU!

2) R FOR VIOLENCE. THIS SHOULD NOT MAKE ME AS HAPPY AS IT DOES, HEEEEEE /rolls around in glee

3) SET IN THE SUPERNATURAL UNIVERSE. KHJVLSDKFJGLSKDFHGLKDLIHIHFLTKHC.BFGN,.HGHLXHJLN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

the start already makes me OMG OMG WHAT IS HAPPENING WHAT IS GOING ON OMG \o/ tense excitement and joyyyyyyyyy skgjhskjh

Ryo's phonecall is awesome XD I love the thought of him chewing Pi's ear off, and:

"So, we're going to take the job?"

"I guess we have to-he said he was calling in his favor for Sendai."

"That was sneaky of him."

*flaps arms* BACKSTORYYYYY I really like how that instantly sets up a history of shared experiences and they're in the same metaphorical boat and Jin is useless and lghskljghsf gs \o/

but Ryo liked to think of himself as an asshole and Masuda never felt like contradicting him, even if he knew differently.

*gurgles and rolls around happily* gyuuuueeeeee >3<

"[…]He could have called Tanaka or Taguchi, but no."

I know this is NEWSfic but *flails* yayyyy X3 ♥

since Ryo hadn't actually officially told the other that they were taking the job, even if Yamashita seemed to be taking that as a given.

LOL XDDD

right after Ryo had begrudgingly agreed to let Masuda shadow him

eeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee why does that make me as happy as it does akfjhadsas idek I love it X3

Massu information-gatherer agkjhdlafkjhsdlajfhs I loveeeee

DFBJDFGS;NODG;OHX KUSANO

KUUUUUUSAAAANOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO

\o/

\o/

\o/

"I'm still pissed at Yamashita, though.

"Yeah, he knows."

sfkjhldsakjfgs HEEE XD

but it was clean, which made Masuda immensely happy

*spazjoy* Massu's love for cleanliness = me being happy

"Seriously, you couldn't make me a student of something less… fruity."

I nearly sprayed tea over my laptop AHAHAHA best description of drama students omg XD

AND WHY DID I JUST FLAIL AT MASSU STUDYING BIOCHEMISTRY. ANON YOU ARE MAKING ME FLAIL AT THE STRANGEST THINGS ILU 8<

Ryo looked incredibly not pleased. “So you get to run off and play scientist and I have to wear tights and prance around stage?”

“I thought you’d make a more convincing drama student.”

tears are forming in my eyes from the effort of not laughing at this *is in company* omg. omg I love the interaction between them so much isgjhlsjhgfgklajh *weeps and flails* they are so adorableeee

but sitting in the student commons while he scoped things out, an open book and his laptop and a notepad spread out before him, he sort of felt like he belonged.

*clutches heart* ohgod Massssuuuuuuuu T^T I want to see him be a student /notacreep He would be so adorably awesomely afjhsdkljsdhga idek I want it T^T ♥

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it hasn't stopped being a long comment yet yararanger September 6 2010, 20:58:40 UTC
SHRIEK

TEGOSHI!!

HEY THERE, YOU!

“I'm not 17 anymore.” Tegoshi laughed and leaned back in his chair.  “You look the same.  You haven't changed your hair since High School."

“I like this hair."

aurhhgfdlkjghkdshg <333333333333333333333333333333333333333 haghaakflhasgklasf I love the interaction between Tego and Massuuuuuuuu

"I know a place with really great pie."  Tegoshi grabbed his bag from the floor and stood, throwing him an excited look.  Masuda started to pack away his things slowly, methodically, and smiled while Tegoshi fidgeted beside him.  Things really hadn't changed much.

huuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu~~~~~~ *rolls around* god how is this so awesome disgfhalskjghasz and Kusano 'wasn't that bad' hee XDD ♥

\SWIMMIIIINGGG!!/

Masuda had barely set foot in their room that evening before Ryo started bitching.

…my bid to control laughter just totally failed. AHAHAHA I love when Ryo gets his bitch on omg <33333333333333333 forever XD /dies

"I'm supposed to be using tonight to reflect on my journey through the birth canal so I can re-enact it for class tomorrow."

OMG MY STOMACH HURTTTTTTSSSSSSSSSSSSSAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA CRYYYYYYYING

Ryo always got weird when it came to reminders of Masuda's life before hunting, all uptight and guilty and that wasn't really something they needed to deal with while they were on a job.

huuuuu omg Ryoooooo :<<<<<<<<< *smothers them with love*

akjlfghlajfhgalgdfs I am so intrigued as to the actual plot of this, too. What is it? What's happening? Why are these people being targeted? *______* I deeply, deeply love that I care so much about the actual plot of this, too. IT'S AMAZING.

he knew that if he brought it up Ryo would get that pinched look on his face and would shut himself off, claiming everything was fine while he silently brooded about the past and blamed himself

;A; I can see it so perfectly kjaghasdgagjhs ;_; Ryoooooooo ;_; don't be like that ;_; we still love you ;_;

I'll still get a decent mark even if I don't." Coming from anyone else it probably would have sounded conceited. Coming from Tegoshi it just sounded like fact.

*SNORTS* omg, Tegoshi I really do love you XD You are my favourite brat in the whole world XD ♥

"I had to skip lunch.".

"Ryo--"

"Don't get all mother hen on me." Ryo paused long enough to give Masuda an annoyed look.  "It was for a good reason."

ohgod they are so beautifully domesticated and married and akjdghakjfhakjhs

"Kamenashi Kazuya--the drama kid that went apeshit."

AHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA I LOVE YOU (sorry Kame)

and omgggg I am beginning to feel kinda on-edge about Massu continually hiding Tegoshi from Ryo, even if it's ostensibly for Ryo's own good DX is Tegoshi going to turn out to be the bad guy? *-* IT'S LIKE HE'S HAVING AN AFFAIR WITH ANOTHER WOMAN :O :O :O :O :O :O :O

"They'd probably just condense all the research into a snappy little montage," Tegoshi agreed.

gdi Team America will never allow me to think of a montage in the same way ever again *sobs quietly*

*rolls around in emotional turmoil* I love them all so much I am so conflictedddd right nowwwww

Ryo was always so worried about Masuda missing out on having a normal life that he didn't seem to stop and think that he was missing out on that life, too.

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:DDDDDDDDDDDDD yararanger September 6 2010, 20:59:24 UTC
Ryo wrinkled his nose, looking for all the world like he agreed.  "Well, then, what are we waiting for? Let's go burn the bitch."

YAY GO BURN THE BITCH \o/ Poor dead Erina :( :( :( :( :( …why do I have a feeling that it's not going to be over that easily? *gleefully reads on*

Masuda had a feeling it wouldn't have taken that long to find, the scarf hanging off a hook in a pretty conspicuous spot, no one obviously making an effort to hide it.

This is too easy. This has to be too easy. omg *buzzes with excitement*

OMG WAIT IT JUST CLICKED - WE'RE APPROACHING THE POINT WE STARTED AT WITH KNIFE-WIELDING RYO. OMGGGGGGGGGG TENSIONNNNNNN

omggggg demon killed Massu's familyyyyy ;A; omg Massu T^T *mothers him*

"No." Masuda reached for his mostly full beer and took a sip, smiling sadly as he pulled the glass from his lips and rested it back against the table.  "Ryo did."

*long drawn-out squeak muffled in sleeve* !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! <33333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333ILOVETHEMSOMUCH

Ryo blinked, shooting Masuda a look out of the corner of his eye and smiling a tight lipped smile.  "I can't really say the same about you. Sorry."

ouuuucccccccccccccccccccccchhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh omg the awkward in the air it is so awkward and in the air and awkwarddddddddddd I LOVE THIS SDKLJGHSLKGHSLKHG

Well, he'd gotten his chance to say goodbye to Tegoshi before he left, at least.  Now he just needed to figure out how to explain to Ryo that he'd lied to him for his own good.  It was going to be hard, considering he wasn't entirely sure he still believed that excuse himself.

\(°A°)/ GYAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHH THIS IS SO TENSE AND AWKWARD AND GYAAAAAAAH omg and wet towels on the floor RYO STOP BEING PETTY AKDJGHAKHFS BUT DON'T BECAUSE IT'S BEAUTIFUL :<

O NO NO NO NO NO NON ONDFLHIOGDKLHJBLKFHGLJASFG NOOOOOO NO MASSU DON'T GO FOR BREAKFAST WITH TEGOSHI NO NO NO NO DON'T GO DON'T GO DON'T GO IT WILL ALL END HORRIBLYYYYY NO NO NO NO

His smile faded abruptly when he remembered that when he got back to the hotel he would probably be the one Ryo was glaring daggers at.  Or, worse yet, giving that sad, hopeless, guilty look that said he was just waiting for the other shoe to drop and Masuda to decide he wanted to leave.

ohgod my heartttttt T^T my heeaaaaarrrrrrtttttttt ;A;

Masuda's hands itched with the need to start straightening things just looking at it.

algjhalkfjhas :<

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\o/ \o/ \o/ \o/ \o/ \o/ \o/ yararanger September 6 2010, 21:02:46 UTC
"Keeping you here.  I can't let you leave, you know. Either of you."

BFJKLSAALKDFJGBXFLIUKBGSD SHIRKEKLGFSN.KJG.KZJSGSF YESSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS YAYAYAYAYYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYYAYAYAYAYYYAYUKSDYGAFKUASDZGOYZSDV;PCUIZSDGF;CIUSDGFLJKHSDGF;OFAIHSGKSJHZF TEGOSHI IS THE BAD GUY OMG AND FURTHERMORE IT'S NOT TEGOSHI BUT HE'S POSSESSED OMG JOY JOY JOY JOY DEEP DEEP INDESCRIBABLE JOYYYYYYYYYY WHY IS THIS MAKING ME SO HAPPY OMG FULL OF GLEEEEEEEEE

SHRIEKING KSJGLKDJFBHLJSHDFS I AM SPAZZING SO HARD AYYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYYAYAYAYAYAYAYYAYGPISDFGIPUIUPSDGPUSDUOGHOU[SGUHOPSHOPRGHOPUESFIUHPGIHSDFHGIDWFGSERLGBDQRG;EAGFAOD

OMGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGG

"You're going to kill us and you have no idea why? What are you, the demon equivalent of a little bitch boy?"

*SNORT* XDDDD

GYAAAAJKAFH.KSHFLKAJSDLFKAHSD

SPAZZING FOREVER

OMG IS TEGOSHI GONNA

OMG

well, not Tegoshi but

OMG

IT'S GOING TO POSSESS RYO INSTEAD?!?!?!?!?!??!?!?!??!??!?!?!?!?!?!?!?

"Because I know you."

"I wouldn't be so sure of that."

;A; BOYYYYSSSSSSSSSSSSS ;A;

omfgggg I wanna punch this professor in the everything YOU HAVE DONE SUCH A GOOD JOB OF MAKING ME HATE HIM omg my heart is all agj,bds,jhgdf.jgdfosgh;aeoighsefougheo[ighd I AM LOVING THIS SO HARD YDEK THIS IS AMAZING

"No."

I just shrieked "YES!" at a pitch only velociraptors could hear (if they were still around)

"What are you--" he started, trying to back away from Ryo's hand but some unseen force held him there, wide eyed and shaking as Ryo's eyes glowed a sickening crimson.  It was like time froze for a moment, leaving Masuda stuck there in an unending moment, watching the professor try to struggle away from Ryo's hand while Ryo sneered in a way that was nothing like the Ryo that Masuda knew.

o.m.gggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggg

YAYAYAYAYYAAYAYYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYYAAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYY THE PROFESSOR IS BURRRRRRNIIIIIIIIIIINGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGG I should feel slightly guilty for being happy about this but the guilt is fleeting YAY YAY DIE!

"You're still bleeding."  Ryo's reached up, fingertips shaking as he wiped the blood from Masuda's neck, his eyes narrowed as he leaned in to inspect the cut  marring his skin carefully.

"I'm fine." Masuda smiled and let him fuss for a minute before pushing him away gently.  "It's just a scratch."

*clutches face and flails* ;A; theyaresoadorablewhyyyyygdklsjghlskdjhglksdjhgk;ejhfd

"My past is part of who I am, and who I am is your partner, Ryo.  Your friend.  I owe it to you to let you know that side of me, too and I shouldn't have lied about Tegoshi.  So, I'm sorry."

I WANNA CRY THIS IS SO PERFECT EKJSTHLASJHS ;_; seriously. My heart is like a hot air balloon of happiness right now ;_; ♥

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HOME STRETCH! yararanger September 6 2010, 21:03:24 UTC
"So, basically what you're telling me is that every scary story that anyone has ever told me is real." Tegoshi took a bite of his cake, eyes moving from Ryo's face and then back to Masuda's for comfirmation.

SHRIEK TEGOSHI IS STILL THERE A WEEK LATER THEY DIDN'T JUST LEAVE HIM FOREVER AKBGDFLKHG;SF;GKSHBR;FGLHSFD/LB;SDZFBJ.DFSKHSDF.BH;FGOSBGO;SHIDFHIGHO;SBG;BDFS;GL;BSVVSIVY;FPGIYDFGI IMPLODING WITH JOY OMG

Masuda sipped at his coke and refrained from pointing out that Ryo had called fan death a "load of horse shit" quite loudly on numerous occasions.

*muffles giggles* akdjfghalkdjhfa I love them omg :<

"But that's just it. With the right psychology, maybe you could help them heal and move on."

TEARS OF LAUGHTER. OH TEGOSHI. YOU WOULD. YOU. WOULD. I LOVE THIS. SOBBING

Tegoshi grinned and turned to Masuda. "You know what you guys remind me of? Those books about the brothers who travel around killing things by what's his name... Carver Edlund."

I NEARLY HURT MYSELF SPAZZING AT MY LAPTOP RDKJGSLDIHRGLKJG OP'L'JBANJB;SKJZNCK HUGZHJVBSJNDVXIFHBJANMSKJVISHBJGNMDFNGHSKND JVRSIJOGTURHDRDSIJOHJBKFNZ;IRHUSFJKNDJIHULGIODHSBJFXZ HEEEEEEEE HEEEEEEEEEEEEE HEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE /retarded wheezing laugh omg

THIS. WAS. FANTASTICALLY AMAZINGLY AWESOMELY BRILLIANT OMG. I AM SO FULL OF JOY AFTER A SPECTACULARLY CRAPPY DAY. Thank you so much so so so so so so so so so SO MUCH, anon-san, I can't begin to express my joy at how brilliant this fic is. I want to force it down everyone's throats READ IT READ IT READ IT IT IS FANTASMICALLY FANTASTIC there aren't enough superlatives in the world to convey how much I want to get married to this fic :< THANK YOU. FOREVER.

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Re: HOME STRETCH! track_04 September 12 2010, 21:14:30 UTC
I wanted to respond to everything in this comment but there's too much and it's too amazing, so let me sum up:

HEY, ASSBUTT! I LOVE YOU. ♥



I'm so so so so so so so so so so so so SO happy you liked it, Peeps! I really wanted to write something that you'd like, and I'm glad that it turned out that way. ;o; Your comments totally made my year. It was next to impossible to contain my glee reading them. *squishcling* ♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥

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Re: HOME STRETCH! yararanger September 12 2010, 21:20:00 UTC
TEARS OF SUPREME INDESCRIBABLE JOY TT__________________________TT MY WORLD IS GLITTER

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Re: HOME STRETCH! yararanger January 24 2011, 23:17:12 UTC
I STILL LOVE THIS FIC TT^TT

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Re: HOME STRETCH! track_04 January 24 2011, 23:54:00 UTC
YOU'RE STILL MY FAVORITE ASSBUTT. T___T <333

*cough* I just remembered I had this scene lingering around in my google docs and now seems like a good time to share... >.>

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"Take off your shirt."

"What?" Ryo froze, his fingers grasping the hem of his shirt awkwardly. "No. Fuck off."

"Ryo." Massu didn't move from his position on the bed, but he gave Ryo a look that said he thought the other was being an idiot. Again. "That demon got in some good hits. I need to check and make sure your ribs aren't broken."

"I can tell if my own ribs are broken. Thanks."

"Yeah, and if they were would you do anything about it or would you try to ignore it like you did when you broke your wrist last year?"

Ryo glowered at the other but didn't argue.

"Come on." Massu stood, crossing the distance between them and laying a hand on the small of Ryo's back, nudging him towards the bed. Funny, that his hands could be that gentle when he has such a pissy look on his face. Stubborn asshole.

"I'm fine."

"I'll be the judge of that."

Ryo sighed and took a seat on the edge of the bed, hoping he didn't look as slow and clumsy as he felt. He reached for the hem of his shirt, wincing as he drug it upwards. Even if he had broken something, there really wasn't a hell of a lot you could do with broken ribs. Besides, they didn't have the time or money to waste on a doctor. Besides, casts seriously fucked with your mobility.

"Stop." The bed dipped as Massu sat beside him, brushing Ryo's hands away as he took the hem of the other's shirt and pulled it upwards. Ryo lifted his arms and bit the inside of his lip, carefully avoiding meeting the other's eyes. He really hated it when Masuda was right. "Yeah, you seem fine."

"I am."

Ryo sank his teeth deeper into his lip as the other prodded at the bruises spreading up his side. The touch was gentle, but even that was enough to send fire shooting across his ribcage. He let out a soft puff of air and tried not to squirm.

"Nothing broken. Bad bruising, though. You'll have to go easy for a few days."

"Like hell. This job--"

"This job is over." Masuda's hand was on his elbow, gripping it carefully, the heat from his palm enough to make the air in the dingy little hotel room feel cold. "We'll take a couple of days off."

"We don't get days off."

"We're taking a couple of days off, Ryo."

Ryo made the mistake of meeting the other's eyes, the stubborness and worry there enough to make him still. He watched the other for a heartbeat before jerking his elbow out of his grasp, ignoring the pain that shot up and down his side at the sudden movement. "Two days, tops."

"Two days." Massu sighed, expression softening into a tired smile. "Now get some rest."

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Re: HOME STRETCH! yararanger January 25 2011, 00:00:41 UTC
OH MY GOD I KSDJFGHALKFSGS CLUTCHING MY HEART TT_____TT me flapping my arms at the computer screen and going "aaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥" doesn't actually help convey my sentiment very well to you because you can't see me (or can you? oO) but odfmghakdfhgdf omg ahhh crabby Ryo doesn't want Massu to worry or akgjhsghslkagh;fiu and ahhh Massu so squishy and caring and TT^TT omg can I smoosh them omg I promise I'll be gentle and not hurt Ryo too much alkgjhsdkjfhs TT^TT ♥♥♥♥♥♥♥ thank you so much, what a perfect time to share this ;A; *smothers you with love*

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