I am really supposed to be studying for a project proposal that i need to write, and instead, i read THIS wonderful fic. :D
I loved it. I like how Shige's facade breaks at the end, where he can let go and not have to worry because Ryo is BACK and there with him. I like the desperation that you show from both sides, and this fic is just FANTASTIC :D
i'm not the original writer but thought i'd mention that there's a formatting messup in the middle of this part in case you wanted to fix it. no spaces between the lines. the rest of it looks okay though, just that one bit. :/
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anonymous
September 9 2009, 07:32:31 UTC
OP-san,
This was lovely~ &hearts
Ryo as a secret agent. Shige in intelligence. Watching the one person you know to be skilled enough to handle the toughest tasks imaginable fall down the stairs and lose all memories and have to sit there and try to provoke the memories while not saying anything--it must be beyond painful.
I love the way Shige's determination to keep his identity a secret is secretly worn down. It's the most realistic thing to happen to someone and it was beautifully written.
Not to mention happy endings always make me happy and mentions of Koyama, Tegoshi, Massu and Pi gives this extra bonus points~ :]
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I loved it. I like how Shige's facade breaks at the end, where he can let go and not have to worry because Ryo is BACK and there with him. I like the desperation that you show from both sides, and this fic is just FANTASTIC :D
Great job!
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This was lovely~ &hearts
Ryo as a secret agent. Shige in intelligence. Watching the one person you know to be skilled enough to handle the toughest tasks imaginable fall down the stairs and lose all memories and have to sit there and try to provoke the memories while not saying anything--it must be beyond painful.
I love the way Shige's determination to keep his identity a secret is secretly worn down. It's the most realistic thing to happen to someone and it was beautifully written.
Not to mention happy endings always make me happy and mentions of Koyama, Tegoshi, Massu and Pi gives this extra bonus points~ :]
&hearts
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I could feel Shige's pain.
I can't wait for more, even the first fic was already so great! :D
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