A Birthday to Remember

Sep 06, 2012 14:12

Title: A Birthday to Remember
Rating: K+
Pairing: A/R
Disclaimer: don't own them.
Word Count: ~250
Summary: It's Zak's birthday...
A/N: Written for a prompt from astreamofstars.

He was quieter than usual--if that were possible. )

a/r, fanfiction, bsg

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fragrantwoods September 6 2012, 21:12:53 UTC
Sweet and poignant--nicely done :-)

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newnumbertwo September 6 2012, 21:14:41 UTC
Aww, thanks.

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somadanne September 7 2012, 04:30:00 UTC
He covered her hand with his left one and turned his head to face her. “Today was his birthday.”

Oh, ouch--this just breaks my heart.

Lovely work.

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newnumbertwo September 7 2012, 04:39:12 UTC
Aww, thanks. That's so nice to hear. :)

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afrakaday September 7 2012, 04:43:31 UTC
Love the ease of comfort and understanding she is able to give him here. Such a nice scene in which a bout of Bill's melancholy is resolved constructively.

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newnumbertwo September 7 2012, 11:26:04 UTC
Aww, thanks!

It's so nice to hear from you! :D

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lambrosia September 7 2012, 11:48:23 UTC
Love how she reads him so well. the poor guy looks sad half the time, so it's really nice to see that she sees the subtleties and nuances in his face and in his behavior. And a hug! awwww!

and this!

“No matter how much we’ve lost since then...”

wow.

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newnumbertwo September 7 2012, 11:55:10 UTC
Oh, thanks. That's what I love so much about them--they just "get" each other. I'm glad you liked the hug too. Hugs can be really nice. :)

Thanks for reading. :D

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redrockcan September 7 2012, 16:55:47 UTC
Awwww. So sweet and angsty. I love them discussing and opening up about their pasts. Very nice work!!

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newnumbertwo September 7 2012, 16:57:33 UTC
Aww, thanks. I was given a really good prompt, and I was happy to work with it. Thanks for reading. :)

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