Omerta: Chapter One

Jan 01, 2015 08:17

Title: Omerta: Chapter One ( Read more... )

omerta, writing, fanfiction, bill/laura/saul, bsg

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plaid_slytherin January 1 2015, 17:22:13 UTC
Oh, what a fantastic beginning! I love where this picks up. This AU feels so natural. Bill and Laura as best friends and confidantes is perfect. I can't wait to see what happens next and how Saul comes into it. Thank you for the preview. ♥♥♥

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newnumbertwo January 2 2015, 15:54:01 UTC
I'm so glad you enjoyed the beginning. :D It was so much fun to think about and plan.

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lanalucy January 1 2015, 18:22:46 UTC
I love this verse. I can't wait to see more of it this year.

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newnumbertwo January 2 2015, 15:54:21 UTC
I'm excited to get back into it too. :)

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fragrantwoods January 1 2015, 21:29:03 UTC
This works so well...I love the idea of the Adama and Roslin families having this long history and these roles. And Laura having the chance to deal with her heartbreaks in a more direct way--delicious and intriguing. Can't wait to see where this goes- Such an engaging 'verse and you've maintained their voices even in these new roles.

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newnumbertwo January 2 2015, 15:56:38 UTC
Aww, thanks for such kind words. The Adamas and Roslins just *wanted* to have this history. I'm thrilled you enjoyed the beginning. Thanks for supporting this 'verse. :D

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laura_mayfair January 2 2015, 19:52:03 UTC
I loved re-reading this and watching the alliance between Bill and Laura deepen. The flashback feels so seamless and supports what's happening in the present. It all feels very visual and I get a real sense of film here in your writing, if that makes sense. <3

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newnumbertwo January 2 2015, 20:32:09 UTC
Aww, thanks for re-reading, and such lovely words. That bit about film makes total sense. :D And was my aim, "shooting my novel," if you will.

Thanks for everything. :D

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