Who Wants to Be Brian Kinney - Part 2

[anwamane13]

for the challenge - The Problem With Brandon - neverenough_bj

Comments

[sjmpets]

i fell for it just like brandon did except when you wrote that "Justin, instead of moving, kept looking at a point behind Brandon, above his head, eyes heavy lidded with desire." this was so clever.

the ending.....perfect

"The problem with Brandon was that he wanted so much to be Brian Kinney that he forgot to be himself."

[anwamane13]

Thanks for the comment, hun. I really appreciate it.
Brandon was so busy trying to be better than Brian, that he forgot to take care of his own life.

[herefordroad]

i'm not surprised by brian's actions, after all:

"He. Is. Mine.”

arrogant brandon has been brought to his knees handily by brian and justin.

jeannie

[anwamane13]

Yeah, Brandon is really an arrogant man, and he thought it was easy to have Justin because he simply sees himself as much better than everyone. I bet he didn't leave Babylon very happy.
Thanks fot your commeent!

[shadownyc]

This was an excellent piece. I like the mood you set and the end secured the understanding that B/J completely trust each other.

Great fic!

[anwamane13]

Thanks a lot! I tried to show that, even though they had a fight, Brian and Justin are perfectly comfortable with each other (Brian's insecurities apart) and know the place they have in each other's lives.

[jans_intentions]

Excellent piece. Thanks for taking part!

[anwamane13]

Thank you! I'm really glad you liked it. :oD

[luv_dox]

Great conclusion. I knew Brain would make sure Brandon understood what is Brian's is Brian's. No Trespassing! I really liked the last line:

"The problem with Brandon was that he wanted so much to be Brian Kinney that he forgot to be himself."

That sums Brandon up perfectly. Thanks for taking part in the challenge.

[anwamane13]

Thank you!
I tried to show Brandon as someone who wanted Brian's place in everything, even with Justin, and even though it was just to show Brian he could have Justin if he wanted to. All because he lost the stupid bet years ago. well, he got what he deserved.