Belonging: Chapter Twenty One

Dec 09, 2008 13:59

Author's Note: Okay, two of our boys are doing the nasty in this one; if that offends you then I suggest you skip this chapter. On the other hand, you might have been waiting for this a very long time...

Title: Belonging - Chapter Twenty One
Fandom: Doctor Who/Torchwood
Characters Jack/Ten
Rating: This Chapter - NC-17 for explicit sexual ( Read more... )

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thrace_adams December 9 2008, 14:17:38 UTC
*points to icon* Holy crap...that mind thing was really hot...and seeing the Doctor come undone and all nervous at the same time? Lovely...but then that last line...made ME nervous LOL

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stargazer60 December 9 2008, 15:07:04 UTC
This was very well done....the Doctor seemed a little nervous at first but then made up for it in drothes!!

I'm sure Jack *will* square things with Ianto, and all will be well..

But....Jack? What's going on in your head at the end there??????

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never_more_fics December 9 2008, 17:07:21 UTC
Oh c'mon, as if Jack thinks all of this could just be that easy...

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angely78 December 9 2008, 15:13:20 UTC
ohhh you are a wicked, wicked person. WICKED. Giving us all that omg mind blowing jeeesus god sex and then ending it with that ...hm? Yes You are EVIL.

but damn good

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missthingsplace December 9 2008, 16:10:06 UTC
Oh my ... that was hot and gorgeous ...

...but what's going on in Jack's head???

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never_more_fics December 9 2008, 17:07:43 UTC
Paranoia.

With good reason? Hmm.

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omg elli2008 December 9 2008, 17:06:58 UTC
omg that was fantastic finally some jack and doctor action love it i got quite hot reading that hehe i hope the next chapter will be as rounchy as this one

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