Fic: For We Have Made an End - White Collar/Inception, Neal + Arthur, PG

Jun 19, 2011 18:26

Title: for we have made an end
Fandoms: White Collar/Inception
Characters: Neal, Arthur (fraternal twins!AU)
Rating: PG
Autor's Note: This is a response to tigriswolf's prompt a comment_fic. Title is loosely, loosel based upon this poem.
Summary: Arthur likes rules.

We are returning by the road we came. )

comment!fic, fic: crossover: white collar/inception, fic: white collar, fic: crossover, gen, pg, verse: paint-by-numbers, fic: inception

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tigriswolf June 20 2011, 01:16:56 UTC
You totally did okay, dude! Did you make a list of the rules anywhere?

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then the words came in, and the words sat down (1/3) nevcolleil June 29 2011, 15:23:47 UTC
I am putting together a list. Here are a few more things on it...

Seven:

It isn’t that obvious. Neal doesn’t think it’s that obvious. He’d say it’s maybe… sixty percent obvious as a disaster in the making.

“There’s no way this ends well,” Arthur tries to tell him.

Arthur’d say that it’s more likeninety-five percent … And that that’s his optimistic opinion.

“There’s a forty percent chance that it will,” Neal insists. He insists that Charles is worth it.

He almost punches Arthur in the face, six weeks later, as they speed down the I-90, on their hasty way out of Los Angeles.

Arthur is struggling to contain his laughter.

“Shut up,” Neal says before Arthur can even start.

“Dude. Neal… He thought you were his dead spook ex-boyfriend.” Arthur lets it all come spilling out - words he’s been holding back for hours, shaky with barely restrained mirth. “This is new, even for you.”

“What’s that supposed to- You know what? Nevermind. Shut up. Just drive.”

“And,” Arthur continues, undeterred. “He’s a spook too ( ... )

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Re: then the words came in, and the words sat down (1/3) tigriswolf June 29 2011, 16:13:21 UTC
*glee* SO MUCH *GLEE*

Aww, Neal. And Arthur having to walk away from a fight, with Casey no less.

So awesome!

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then the words came in... (2/3) nevcolleil June 29 2011, 16:15:39 UTC
Twenty-Two and Twenty-Three:

It's Neal's fault that they can't be seen together in Hong Kong for a while (or Neal at all) and Neal owns up to that immediately.

But they're almost all the way back to civilization by the time that Arthur breaks. Neal's tired of the sun. He's tired of sand. He's tired of carrying his coat and shoes but he's not leaving them in the fucking desert (though what he's going to do with them back home, he doesn't know; the blood will never come out of his coat and Italian leather was not meant to trudge through Mexican soil.) Neal is glaring at Arthur whenever he isn't glaring ahead of them, at the salvation that is a cold drink and a hot bath that had better appear in front of them soon.

Neal's just about to say something scathing (and probably unwise) when Arthur throws his hands up and says, "Alright! This is my bad, okay? There, I said it! You can stop giving me the evil eye already. JesusThe psuedo-apology kills most of Neal's anger, but words still escape him. "You shouldn't have tried to ( ... )

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WORDS, they fail me. ofvanity June 20 2011, 03:14:21 UTC
This is. Adorable beyond words. I love how you did this, I love your crossovers, YOU ARE A MAGICAL BEING.

*ahem. I love their bond, HOW YOU MADE THIS THEIR TWIN LANGUAGE (or was that just me being flaily at the idea of twins!?), I love that little smidgen of Arthur/Cobb, Eames' little side, "Ur brother crazy." LOLZ, and the entire dynamic.

Bravooo. :D <3

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Re: WORDS, they fail me. nevcolleil June 29 2011, 14:44:49 UTC
Thank you so much :D Yes, I wanted Neal and Arthur to have their own little twin-speak and for some reason the idea of it being in numbers sounded really Arthur-like to me :p I'm glad you liked it :) And that you caught the Arthur/Cobb :D That's my Inception OTP though I've written more Arthur/Eames than anything (and do enjoy it - the pairing's so popular, it can't help but grow on you, I suppose.)

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Re: WORDS, they fail me. ofvanity July 1 2011, 03:50:43 UTC
Yeah, I love the way you set up that communication, it's clever. It's my pleasure. really. (:

Arthur/Cobb is one of my favorite pairings for that fandom, definitely, but I, too, have written more Arthur/Eames than my OTP, which is Cobb/Saito. The pairing does grow on you, but I'm not gonna lie, the other pairings have a much more interesting dynamic. But that's just me, :D

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snowrose June 20 2011, 13:30:44 UTC
Loved this!

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nevcolleil June 29 2011, 14:45:07 UTC
Thanks :D

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e313 June 21 2011, 18:11:53 UTC
i love it! i love how the bond between them is shown, i love how Arthur tries to protect Neal with ordering 26, i love how Neal disregards it at the end, and i love that Peter lets him do it.

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nevcolleil June 29 2011, 14:45:43 UTC
Thanks :D I'm glad you enjoyed this! :)

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