Sorry it's so late! I got caught up in other stuff. D:
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The couch looked odd, sitting in the middle of the strange land; and for a boy who had fought fire hydrants, that was saying something. Ness frowned as Pokey - was it Pokey? - patted the couch next to him. Hesitantly, he approached. Pokey grinned.
“After all this...do you think we can be friends?”
Ness’ lips quirked. “I don’t think so, Pokey. Sorry.”
Pokey’s face fell; the land around them changed from oranges to dark purples.
“Sorry.” Pokey said, before he faded away.
Ness blinked at where Pokey had been before standing, brushing down his shirt.
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Magicant!Pokey and Ness - regret
If you can't fit that into 100 words, how about Pokey - more awesome than you.
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The couch looked odd, sitting in the middle of the strange land; and for a boy who had fought fire hydrants, that was saying something. Ness frowned as Pokey - was it Pokey? - patted the couch next to him. Hesitantly, he approached. Pokey grinned.
“After all this...do you think we can be friends?”
Ness’ lips quirked. “I don’t think so, Pokey. Sorry.”
Pokey’s face fell; the land around them changed from oranges to dark purples.
“Sorry.” Pokey said, before he faded away.
Ness blinked at where Pokey had been before standing, brushing down his shirt.
“Yeah.” he sighed. “I know.”
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And aww... :(
That almost makes me feel sorry for the little bastard. Almost. I like the way you incorporated the color-changing landscape into this, too.
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