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Fic: Five Things Don Eppes Never Said to His Brother: Don/Charlie

Oct 03, 2006 03:15

Title: Five Things Don Eppes Never Said to His Brother
Fandom: Numb3rs
Pairing: Don/Charlie
Rating: NC-17 (briefly)
Warning: Incest, wangst
Challenge: 5_nevers
Spoilers: "Counterfeit Reality," "Two Daughters"
Disclaimer: Property of CHeuton & NFalacci

( If I were witty, this is where the punchline would be )

5_nevers, numb3rs, fan fic

Comments 12

1trackmind October 3 2006, 19:36:29 UTC

Nicely done. I particularly like the first one (though in fairness, Charlie didn't actually have that conversation with Don, he had it with Larry)

He threw the envelope back into the box. “You only care when it’s about you.” Deer in headlights eyes. “You just float around in your own little world and ignore everyone else. You’ll talk to other people when you can show off your math, but when it’s not about you and your numbers, you’re not there. You don’t ask me anything about my life but then get pissed when I don’t offer it to you. You don’t get to have it both ways.”

Ouch!

neur0vanity October 3 2006, 20:12:06 UTC

Charlie didn't actually have that conversation with Don, he had it with Larry

Right. I have him coming to Don w/ it after speaking to Larry. Though, I think by the time he talks to Larry about it, Don & Co have already left. I dunno. Artistic liberties complete disregard for timeline and canon and all that jazz.

Ouch!

Don's cranky and depressed and slightly drunk, and all he really wants to do is ravage Charlie, but he hasn't crossed that line yet, so he acts like a bitch. Oh, Donny boy.

1trackmind October 3 2006, 20:21:14 UTC

Nice icon!

Don's cranky and depressed and slightly drunk, and all he really wants to do is ravage Charlie, but he hasn't crossed that line yet, so he acts like a bitch. Oh, Donny boy.

Yeah, that sounds about right.

joolz01 October 4 2006, 01:41:51 UTC

Very ouch, but also very plausible. Sometimes the things never said or done hang heavily in the air. Thanks!

neur0vanity October 4 2006, 02:33:09 UTC

Oh no, thank you. I appreciate your thoughts. :)

chelletoo October 4 2006, 04:52:09 UTC

Very sad. I especially like the last section.

neur0vanity October 4 2006, 05:33:45 UTC

Thank you for the feedback. :)

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neur0vanity October 5 2006, 02:01:32 UTC

*blushes* Thank you, Miss Leda. ♥

muiting October 5 2006, 01:47:24 UTC

Wow! That hurts so good! Especially the last line! Just wonderful!

neur0vanity October 5 2006, 02:00:42 UTC

Thank you very much!