when the bright sun falls away (843 words) // (PG-13, mostly for swearing) for mar 13 07. oneechan19 said "purple, cow, camera, cards, beads". Spencer cleans. Jon helps him, sort of.
oh gosh. this is EXACTLY what i wanted to come out of this prompt. boys being smart and cute and COVERED IN GLITTER.
so much love. i like the way you tell a story, with simple language and charming details.
He gets an idea, though, so he touches his fingertip to the tip of Spencer's nose just firmly enough, and when he pulls his finger away Spencer's nose sparkles. Spencer's eyes cross a little, but after a second he gives up and smiles, instead, sparkling as much as his nose.
Jon thinks of the playing card in his pocket, and memory, and later, much later, when he gets back to his stuff, he puts the playing card in his camera case, watching it get glitter everywhere and smiling.
hearts. HEARTS EVERYWHERE. IN EVERY IMAGINABLE EMPTY CORNER, HEARTS.
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so much love. i like the way you tell a story, with simple language and charming details.
He gets an idea, though, so he touches his fingertip to the tip of Spencer's nose just firmly enough, and when he pulls his finger away Spencer's nose sparkles. Spencer's eyes cross a little, but after a second he gives up and smiles, instead, sparkling as much as his nose.
Jon thinks of the playing card in his pocket, and memory, and later, much later, when he gets back to his stuff, he puts the playing card in his camera case, watching it get glitter everywhere and smiling.
hearts. HEARTS EVERYWHERE. IN EVERY IMAGINABLE EMPTY CORNER, HEARTS.
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(Few things are better than boys being cute and COVERED IN GLITTER. This is an important part of life.)
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Also, I like the subtle Spence-is-organizy moments. Because we know he totally is.
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And thank you! I have a feeling Spencer is really one of Those People.
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I absolutely love it. So much love.
Oh, Jon. Oh, Spencer.
You win at life. ♥
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I'm glad you liked it. ♥
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