Constantine Ficlet - A Silver Platter

[nescienx]

Warning: Spoilers from movie. SLASH. Unbeta-ed, but I sought out aingeal_isilme's help on some parts.
Length: 666 words. XD
Pairing: Lucifer/John
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Comments

[aefallen]

It tastes like the best he ever had, and it tastes of triumph
I like this. You have a Lucifer who's completely in control, who's the master of this situation, and you show it.

And after fifteen, Constantine became smarter, more shrewd, playing Lucifer and God against each other in their own game, and getting away with it; it wasn’t just luck anymore.
I love the thought of Constantine doing this. It's sly and brilliant and Constantine at his best, really, tangling with Heaven and Hell and coming out tops at the same time.

How many souls had he lost since then because of John?
I love the irony of this line. I love the thought of Lucifer thinking of the freed souls as lost souls, because they're lost to him.

But John, the adamant and arrogant troublemaker, got back onto his feet fast, and once too often found loopholes to release their cursed souls to heaven.
I like it when you write John like this. Incredibly smart, and unbelievably cunning. And indomitable.

He doesn’t have to do much to have him within his grasp.
I love that. Your Lucifer is one to whom things come easily, to whom nothing is impossible, and you have that.

he’ll show John why he truly belongs to hell as they immerse into sin after sin
You made me want to see that!

Discovers that John still has a trump card up his sleeve.
Fabulous way of ending the story. (For those who've seen the movie, that is.)

This is amazing. You've got a fantastic grasp of Lucifer's voice, and his jaded, knowing way of looking at the world. I never knew you could write Lucifer like this, and I'm glad I got to see it!

[nescienx]

:\ I'm glad you like it. I guess it was barely worthed writing after all.

[aefallen]

Everything you write is worth writing! *hugs you!* And every time I see any of it I'll remind you!

[nescienx]

I hope this isn't about you challenging me into writing a terribly bad fic. *hugs and clings*

[aefallen]

*evil grin* Want a challenge?

If you made it Chas/Constantine, it could never be bad.

*hugs you, and clings to*

[tinted_glass]

BECAUSE YOU WRITE BAD FIC ALL THE TIME? NOT. *BAPS YOU AGAIN*

[nescienx]

What's.... with that icon? *peers*

*is bapped*

*runs away and cries*

[tinted_glass]

I don't know? XD

[nescienx]

Wah! Your icons are so envying. XD <3

[aefallen]

Speaking of Envy, my icon needs to talk to your icon...

*evil grin*

[tinted_glass]

*laughs*

[tinted_glass]

omg how much do I fangirl over that icon it is so hot?

I think I know where that gun has been.

[nescienx]

very much?

And where is that? *whistles*

[tinted_glass]

I like that icon too. O: OMG, YOU TWO STOP DOOMING ME.

In hell!

[nescienx]

This calls for... more temptation! XD

We have... hellblazerslash. XD

[tinted_glass]

NOOO. I DON'T NEED ANOTHER NEW FANDOM K. >___