(spm) First Impressions

Dec 12, 2004 01:19

Title: First Impressions
Fandom: Movie-verse Spider-Man
Pairing: Harry/Peter
Notes: Implied slash. Short. 319 words. Not beta-ed. See, I ought to be shot for writing when I can't.

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aefallen December 12 2004, 02:59:30 UTC
Harry/Peter fic first thing in the morning after attempting to read European Union Law is seven degrees of wonderful, and don't let anyone tell you otherwise.

And when it's you writing it - do you know how happy that makes me?

*attempts to restrain self from highlight-pasting-italicising the entire fic in the comment*

First of all, it's a good fic title.

I like the way you mentioned Harry's track record with his friends. I always like backstory, and that's what you've got here. I like it when a writer's clearly given thought to a character's history and past experiences, when the character exists beyond the now of the fic, when the way the character is is reinforced by what's happened to him.

Forming impressions is only natural to an Osborn; it is an essential to his way of life. Past observations of Norman Osborn have revealed that.
*applauds* You can't really write Harry without writing about Norman, too. *smiles* Because Norman's so much part of why he is the way he is. Or, I'd like to think, Norman's so much of what Harry thinks he has to be.

I love thinking about this line: He remembers his first impression of Peter from high school: bland. Somewhat boring, and definitely bland. next to this one: once you get him on the bed, and I'm, :D SO YOU THOUGHT, HARRY. XDDDD.

Weak too. In the sense that he often let other people have their way with him.
*grin* It's easier that way, sometimes.
And reminds me of me, which scares me.

In fact, Peter is quite the opposite definition of "boring".
*applauds Harry* *giggles*

Though it doesn’t matter now that he has the sixth degree of Peter right here. He isn’t easy to find, but he’s there, once you get him on the bed, he does things Harry wouldn’t have imagined Peter to have done.
*ABSOLUTE HAPPINESS*

*GRIN* Just the kind of thing I like to read.

*hugs you* You're writing Harry/Peter. I couldn't be happier. *smiles*

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nescienx December 12 2004, 05:42:16 UTC
^_^;; CoS on cable!

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aefallen December 12 2004, 06:15:50 UTC
*giggles* You've got to see this. HP actors. ALSO ALSO ALSO you've gotta see this PoA picspam. OMG WHOA.

Heh. HP was the first fandom contact I had with you, even though I didn't know it, then.

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nescienx December 12 2004, 16:14:48 UTC
Oh. My. Tom Felton.

:O~~~~~~

Hehe. Elijah: wtf? He looks kinda like Tobey in the car... I guess it's the hair and the specs.

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aefallen December 12 2004, 16:55:54 UTC
Oh. My. Tom Felton.

Itkindafreaks me out, 'cause my brother looks a little bit like that sometimes. It's the hair.

He looks kinda like Tobey in the car...
HEH. Glad to know I'm not the only one who thinks so. XDDD

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nescienx December 12 2004, 16:20:05 UTC
Eh? There's an Aragorn sketch in that picspam? O.o;

Oh god Snarry.

Trying so hard not to laugh at most of the pics.

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aefallen December 12 2004, 16:57:21 UTC
There's an Aragorn sketch in that picspam?
Heh, no, it's just Really Scruffy! Sirius. Who happens to look like Aragorn. XDDDD

*bursts out laughing* Don't you just love the way he's looking at Snape?

And the Ultimate Chanslash Photo just made me die laughing.

Trying so hard not to laugh at most of the pics.
OMG I just realised you're at work as you read this! *falls off bed*

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nescienx December 12 2004, 17:17:14 UTC
Yes- ultimate chan slash. :D

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nescienx December 12 2004, 16:20:32 UTC
I just realised that's Envy/Ed. ^_^;

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aefallen December 12 2004, 16:58:03 UTC
I just realised that's Envy/Ed. ^_^;

HEH. HEH. HEH.

Good on ya. :D

Gods, I love the pairing. I was, "WHY IS NO ONE WRITING THIS" and then realised there was an entire community. *is evil*

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nescienx December 12 2004, 05:47:52 UTC
I never thought anyone could give so much comments on one short fic. ^_^; *hugs back*

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HI, BABY. aefallen December 12 2004, 06:12:12 UTC
I never thought anyone could give so much comments on one short fic.

If I focus on the I never thought aspect of your comment, the first reply I wanted to give involved quoting your fic at you. *evil grin*

I shall settle for:

*beams* When it comes to you, I could go on forever. *grin* *happily comments*

OMG did you get my postcard?

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Pete, don't call me BABY in public. nescienx December 12 2004, 16:10:34 UTC
... My inner-Harry is embarrassed, but call him what you want. XD

Harry: ...

You always go on forever. ;D

No, I didn't get your postcard at all. =_=

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'k, Harry. *grin* aefallen December 12 2004, 16:54:43 UTC
You know I'll always find some other way to fangirl you in public. *dies laughing*

No, I didn't get your postcard at all. =_=
OMG neither did Sena. *KILLS LONDON POST* I think I'm having the worst luck with them this year. Heh.

*thinks* I sent another one last week, so let's see if that comes through. *laughter*

You always go on forever. ;D
*bursts out laughing* I SHOULD HOPE SO, with you around...

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