Sentiments [CNU/Sandeul]

Jul 30, 2014 13:46

Corporate!AU
Installment II.
with established relationships
non-chronological
(previous installments: I.)

Sentiments | CNU/Sandeul, hinted CNU/Jinyoung | R | 1700w.

Jinyoung let Dongwoo have Junghwan on Fridays. )

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greyjoyofpyke July 30 2014, 18:14:56 UTC
AHHHH!!!!!!! i don't even know what to say! this was really good. you really have a way with words and conveying scenes. everything flows so seamlessly. i love how their relationship unfolds in a series of coincidences. the entire sofa scene had me reading between my fingers.

What Dongwoo didn’t account for when he slumped against the couch, still hard, was Junghwan slipping between his legs, unzipping his pants, tugging down his briefs, nuzzling his face into Dongwoo’s crotch. He didn’t account for Junghwan, in his clouded state, sucking him off and making obscene noises that drove Dongwoo crazy. He didn’t account for his own hand reaching to grasp Junghwan’s hair, his own hips thrusting shallowly as he fucked Junghwan’s mouth. He didn’t account for the come that trickled down the sides of Junghwan’s mouth as Junghwan looked up at him through his disheveled fringe.

really can i just scream at this entire part?

and i like that twist at the end.

wow this was so unexpected and so well written! it's not often we get a shindeul fic in this ficdom! THANK YOU!

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nephre August 8 2014, 01:19:46 UTC
Thank you for leaving a lovely comment!

Haha writing sex scenes makes me really uncomfortable, so I'm glad you liked them!

This part actually takes place after the drabble in the previous installment where Jinyoung kisses Sandeul right after hiring him.

We always need more Shindeul in fandom!! T~~~~T

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