Beautiful Mistake 1/?

Dec 04, 2012 01:21


Title:  Beautiful Mistake
Author:  Neolithicdream
Pairing:  Callie/Arizona
Rating: PG-13
Summary:    After everything is said and done has it all been a mistake? A marriage built on shifting sands?  Maybe they should just cut their losses and run. After all, if recent events have taught them nothing else it is that life is short.    Inspired by ( Read more... )

art:fanfic, fanfic:callie/arizona

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neolithicdream December 5 2012, 13:49:08 UTC
Thank you very much for that!

Well you know I was a bit worried there was too much 'wordiness' in this opening chapter so I value your judgement and opinion.Any way I expect most of the rest of this fic will be dialogue - based with just a little bit of introspection thrown in from time to time.

Glad you liked that line - Dark and twisty!

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elledee68 December 5 2012, 23:48:24 UTC
Thank heaven for lots of words!
Enjoyed reading chapter 1, and excited to read more.
My heart is breaking in preparation though! :,0(

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neolithicdream December 5 2012, 23:57:37 UTC
glad you enjoyed it, yes if I do my job right there will be a few tears, mostly Arizonas and Callies I hope.

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neolithicdream December 6 2012, 02:48:11 UTC
Thank you, hopefully next chapter will be within a day,two at most

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pens_co927 December 6 2012, 04:10:20 UTC
*covers eyes* i"m afraid of what's behind the door.

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neolithicdream December 6 2012, 09:31:08 UTC
Only a not very happy Callie!

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neolithicdream December 6 2012, 09:31:40 UTC
Thank you.

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