Sealing the Deal 1/1

[neolithicdream]

TITLE: Sealing the Deal 1/1

AUTHOR: Neolithicdream

PAIRING: Callie & Arizona

RATING: PG 13

SUMMARY: This is a very late sequel to a short one shot called ‘Making a DeaI’ posted in the immediate aftermath of Ep. 7.17 (the one before ‘the Music Event’). So it’s no longer following what actually happened at all. Still you need to read the first part to

Comments

[funkyshaz57]

Really really really happy you did a follow up! I liked this a lot! I liked how you made Karev care so much for Arizona I think these two make a great team, I've always said if she wasn't a Gold Star Lesbian I'd be hoping for her and Karev to hook up lol - Plus I want more scenes with these two not just work one's but more friend scenes

Great work, really enjoyed it, you made Mark out to be a nice guy, at least it can be done in FF cos I don't think there's much they can do in my eyes on the show that will ever make me like him lol

Great work! Perfect ending too!

[neolithicdream]

Thanks as always!

[noacparker]

Very nice. Glad Callie got forewarned of the "deal." It's not one she'd have wanted. Love Karev sticking up for Az. Liked that Mark was even being human and drawing analogies from Harry Potter.

[neolithicdream]

Yeah,I could see Arizona becoming all bossy and making Mark read childrens books. Although I bet Mark had read all HP already. I've been trying to work Harry into a fic for a while!
Thanks for commenting!

[luvsara]

AWWWWW....great job!

[neolithicdream]

Thanks!

[majincammy]

Okay, that was terrific. I kinda of wanted to see that on the show, but I knew it wouldn't happen because they kinda did that with Dell in PP and this episode was so hyped up as Callie's journey.

You made me crrrrry, but I'm a super softie, so I'm sure it was expected. I really love your writing and this was another success. <3

[neolithicdream]

Thank you so much! And you did comment first time round only then I was double posting here on my journal and on Callie_Arizona cos I couldnt figure out how to link things..still learning how!
As for the crying its part of my plan for world domination - buy shares in Kleenex make people cry and watch the money role in!

[savache27]

That was just perfect! You had me tearing up a little with Karev. I love the relationship that he and Arizona have. You even made Mark out to be less of a douche. I really loved this, but I gotta admit you had me a little scared there. So glad you did the follow up!

[neolithicdream]

Thank you so much!