Doctors don't make promises, do they? (Callie/Erica, 8/?)

[nelfy]

Title: Doctors don’t make promises, do they?

Author: Nelfy

Characters: Callie Torres, Erica Hahn, Callica ship, slight mentions of Mark, Christina and Addison

Summary: This fanfic shows what happened during the season 4 finale and goes further to explore the relationship between Callie and Erica.

Spoilers: Starts with the season 4 finale

Rating: NC-17

Comments

[docwarnerfan]

Loved this chapter...And the Cristina dirty was cute and funny. I can't wait for chapter nine.

Great!

[my_resonance]

I don't think there was anything in this chapter that you needed to take out. Pretty much all of it seemed essential to what you were trying to achieve, and anything that was fluffy was good, too!

I am glad that the plan didn't backfire, though it's a little saddening that Erica doesn't do the PDA thing with Callie. I mean, she's the one who has actually been with a woman before...it seems like Callie would be the one who'd be jumpy. I hope Callie calls her on this at some point.

The dirty talk was a riot! I had never, EVER thought about Christina having female experience, but it totally fits in your story! And I could really see her saying those inappropriately funny things to Callie, so I say you're good!

Re: Great!

[nelfy]

thanks for your comment!

yeah, callie will react to that in some form at some point of time - I'm working on this! I don't want to give anything away, but I'm glad you noticed!

I like to think that cristina is really open-minded like that, because I feel she's very comfortable with her body and her sexuality. that's how I like to picture her. and I want her and callie to have a fun relationship, cause I don't think they would be friends if there would be a lot of heavy stuff between those two, cause callie isn't cristina's "person"

[iwishiwashahn]

Well done! I really liked this. Keep up the great work. :)

[carorules]

It was awesome, especially the last part with Christina, made me laugh so much!!!

[little_ruby]

I loves this!!!!! and cristina's dirty talk? hot as hell!

[nelfy]

thanks *blush* absolutely loooove your avatar!!

[little_ruby]

thanks, but I can't take credit for it, xx_selene_xx made it...*g*