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nekare

Hide and Seek (R/S)

Feb 22, 2006 00:10

Ha! I caught you again, my evil fic muse, you've nowhere to go now!! *cough* anyway, this was fun to write, as I'd been waiting to write something for this prompt for ages.

Title: Hide and Seek
Rating: PG
Word Count: 795
Summary: Remus is lost, and Sirius can't seem to find him even when he's sitting right next to him.
Author Notes: AU. Written ( Read more... )

tellmeakiss, remus/sirius, fic, hp

Comments 75

melandry February 22 2006, 06:31:26 UTC

I hereby dub this the 'break melandry's heart' AU. Remus not reading hurt me almost as much as Sirius- lovely use of the bit dzturtlepower gave you.

nekare February 22 2006, 06:49:13 UTC

*hands you a tissue* I know, I know, the not reading part is just cruel, but it had to be done XD

Thanks so much!

andrea__88 February 22 2006, 06:32:14 UTC

How sad, made me sniffle. Sirius' pain is so heartbreaking. But he has hope, and that can be a powerful tool. Excellent!

nekare February 22 2006, 06:49:53 UTC

Oh, thank you so much!! Making someone sniffle always feels like an achievement. :)

andrea__88 February 22 2006, 06:50:50 UTC

well feel achieved, I sniffled alot :o)

kyasuriin February 22 2006, 06:45:58 UTC

*pout* it's so bittersweet, what Remus sacrificed so James & Lily could live and what Sirius lost in consequence. Beautifully done.

nekare February 22 2006, 06:50:37 UTC

Thank you so much! It's always a give or take, after all.

aquila_star February 22 2006, 07:11:31 UTC

*sobs*

That is beautiful, and much too heartbreaking. I wanted to write something more but I have no words.

nekare February 22 2006, 21:04:54 UTC

*hands you a tissue*

Thank you!

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nekare February 22 2006, 21:05:20 UTC

Haha, people seem to find that the saddes part of it all XD