Aug 17, 2008 22:00
How can you have 'minor m-preg' in a fic?
Are there different levels of it? Like... Minor, moderate, or major m-preg? It makes sense if it was in reference to how many babies they were having. Or how often it's mentioned... but being pregnant (especially male) would be more of the center of the story... right?
Right?
I don't think you can have minor m-preg. If there's a pregnant man in the story, there's a pregnant MAN in the story. It's like a thousand pound gorrilla on your table. People. Notice. Even more importantly, is that it's a MAN that is a COWBOY who was afraid to even be seen with his special somebody. Anywhere.
Let me just back-track a bit to cover my bases, if this had been in a fandom like... sayy... Fairly Odd Parents, I wouldn't care so much because it's cannon.
Brokeback Mountain has only two fairies and not the magic kind.
This is just from the summary.
I decided I'd better go check out the story just in case I'd gotten my head up my ass. It happens often.
Well that was stupid. I only scrolled through it and it's FILLED with OOC and... just... HORRIFING. I was thinking maybe it was a joke. No such luck.
Jack and Ennis have been replaced by two sissy boys who stutter and declair their undying love for one another while crying. Eugh.
They also do this in a very open place just outside a town.
Do I even NEED to point out all the flaws in this?
It also seems that Ennis was the one bearing the children. Yes. Children. Not one, not two, but three. Possibly even four.
Now I'm just horribly confused. Did we watch the same movie? I mean... I distinctly remember Ennis provoking a man into a fist fight for something stupid because he was pissed. He even punched Jack. You know. The guy he really, really loves.
He also denies being 'queer' several times in the movie. Sure he fucks a guy and loves him with probably all his being, but he sure as hell isn't girly about it. Or the girl for that matter. Ennis cocked a lever action rifle with one hand while riding a horse. That's MANLY.
I'm totally going to rip this to shreds verbaly in a little while. I'll record it and even put it up on youtube or something. =_= I just... this story blows my mind.