Escaping the Past Chapter 1

[neeree]

Tittle: Escaping The Past. Chapter 1
Author: niri (me)
Genre: Yaoi, AU
Characters/Pairing: SasuNaru or NaruSasu (not sure yet), implied Kiba/Shino, Gaara/???, Shika/Tamari. Rating: PG for this Chapter. N-17 later.
Warning: I'll try to mae it a little funny (but humor isn't my thing so beware). Yaoi.
Summary: Naruto is late for the first day of High

Comments

[ranoshi_ai]

Welcome, thank you for your efforts :)
Good job so far, it seemed a bit awkward in the beginning, but the awkwardness disappears after the first couple of scenes. I'm sort of surprised that there haven't been any comments yet, but I really enjoyed the story so far and definitely look forward to seeing your next installment :D

[neeree]

thanks :)
i was afraid about how the story will flow so I'm pretty relieved to hear that it isn't too awkward.
This is literally the first thing I have ever written in my life so I'm pretty happy that people enjoy it :)

[zipper_rabbit]

Very good for a beginning. Cant wait to read the next chapter!

[neeree]

thanks:P
btw, I love your icon (a LOT) ^^

chapter 2 is up :) go look on my journal.

[zipper_rabbit]

Thank you very much! I can't remember where I found it, but I wish I did to give the creator full credit.
Can't wait to read what happens next!

[ceriene]

Cute. Very cute.
I really good start to the story, and it all flows really well.

+mem-ing! ^^=

[neeree]

Thanks. That's great to hear.

Nice icon btw!! <3

[abhorsen3]

I think it's really goos!! I like it, looking forward to reading more^_^

[neeree]

:P Thanks.
More will be in a couple of months after vacation.
Sorry for the wait.

[el_gilliath]

Hey. I like the beginning here, you've done a good job.

Also, if you're looking for a beta for it, if you haven't got one since the first chapter, I'd be happy to help you:)

Just e-mail me at tova@bluezone.no if you'd like to take the offer!

[neeree]

YES!!! *pumps fist in the air* I really need a beta~

glad you liked it btw ^_^ *runs off to email*