New Fic

Apr 04, 2005 02:26

Haven't had a lot of time lately, but I found myself with some extra time tonight. Also, this is the first fic I've written resembling anything close to smut involving Ray & Neela. So if it totally sucks, please tell me so I can burn it.

Title: Sleep to Dream Her
Author: shadow_diva
Rating: FRM (Fan Rated suitable for Mature persons)
Spoilers: None.
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santabutt April 4 2005, 14:31:28 UTC
OMIGOSH...

LOL...that was...*whew* some ride. ::giggles:: I loved it!

Keep Rockin'!

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shadow_diva April 4 2005, 14:48:34 UTC
Yeah? I wasn't sure if it worked, but it refused to change, so I figured what the hell. Glad you liked. :)

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aaricia April 4 2005, 14:47:43 UTC
Holy shit, this is awesome! And hee on me, because I didn't realize it was a dream 'til Ray woke up - that'll teach me to pay attention to the title next time :)

phantom labcoats, fencing scalpels, dancing surgical gloves
*giggling*

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shadow_diva April 4 2005, 14:50:21 UTC
Heh. Glad you liked. I figured Ray's dreams would be a little more *ahem* vivid than Neela's. ;)

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crimsonmaz April 4 2005, 14:52:39 UTC
Woot! That was some kinda hot! Loved the cyclic beginning and end...teehee. Looks like Ray's gonna be taking a lot more ucy showers than he's used to!!!

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shadow_diva April 4 2005, 14:58:39 UTC
Thanks. Yeah, I kinda wanted the beginning and to be the same so I could pick it up and turn it into a real smut fic later on if the plot bunny bit me. ;) Might still do it, I dunno. Glad you liked.

P.S. - Your icon is 50 kinds of cute. :)

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crimsonmaz April 4 2005, 15:21:48 UTC
Yay! Please plot bunny...bite her hard!!! Lol. And I always love reading well-written fanfic...teehee.

Thanks...kitties are so cute...and I love your Ray/Neela icons. Now that's some kinda cute! ;)

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shadow_diva April 4 2005, 15:49:12 UTC
kitties are so cute

Don't I know it. We have a total of 8 cats and 1 dog. The dog and 1 cat are inside the main house, 3 cats are outside, and we have 4 kittens (the parents are 2 of the outside cats) inside in my dad's den. We're keeping 2 and we're giving 2 away. So yeah, kitties are cute. :D

I want to write the plot bunny, but I won't have time until the semester's over (end of April). So sometime after that. :)

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_fullofgrace April 4 2005, 17:29:11 UTC
Guh! And I repeat GUH!

So friggin good. These two need more smut I swear...lol

And I really loved the cyclic feel to the beginning and the end. A very nice touch there.

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shadow_diva April 4 2005, 21:43:41 UTC
So friggin good.

*blushes* Aww, thanks.

These two need more smut I swear.

Hells, yes! I think you need to write some, heh. My smut is lonely. It wants a buddy! ;)

And I really loved the cyclic feel to the beginning and the end.

Thanks. I have plans for it, but I won't have time till the semester's over.

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profshallowness February 16 2006, 08:20:19 UTC
Very hot, I love fanfic fantasy dreams in that they're so near to actual fanfic smut in intensity, it just works on a meta level, somehow. Really loved how you captured Ray's mix of feelings after he woke up, the frustration and resignation. And the ending worked brilliantly.

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shadow_diva February 16 2006, 13:01:47 UTC
Thanks! Glad you liked it. I wanted to leave it open for a sequel to pick up. Maybe Ray won't be dreaming this time. ;)

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