My sad attempt at poetry. Please dont laugh

[needsajob13]

You Know

You know the subtle difference
Between my happy face,
My sad face,
And my I don’t care face.

You know the reason
Why I yell,
I hit,
And I cry.

You know all about
Who I am
I was
And I will be.

You know everything
And yet you never say a word
You just gently help with a hug.
You are my inspiration.

Comments

[julia514]

Kase, a "sad attempt at poetry"? I think not. On the contrary, I would say. :-)

[needsajob13]

LIAR but thank you it makes me feel all warm and fuzzy inside

[veronicaforever]

you should feel as warm and fuzzy as Peter Jackson on a sunny day. I like zat.

[split_screen]

Agreed. (=

nyce

[tart_oblivion]

bravo Kasey. I love it. Deffinately the type of think I myself would write, but no one must know that. ;)

Re: nyce

[needsajob13]

than u should write it on the WORLD WIDE WEB smart one
but i thank you