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needed_beauty

The Infinite and Penitent

Aug 16, 2009 20:38

Title:The Infinite and Penitent
Author: needed_beauty
Rating: PG-13
Pairing: Arthur/Merlin
POV: In my head it was Arthur, but it could either, honestly.
Summary: He could have prevented all of it; he could have shielded them all. He let himself go.
Disclaimer: Not mine, never gonna be.
Beta:madasbunnies
Author Notes: It's my first story in this fandom, so be gentle! xD

( He could have prevented it; he could have shielded them all. He let himself go. )

fanfic: standalone, fic: merlin, rating: pg-13, pairing: arthur/merlin

Comments 8

na_shao August 16 2009, 18:49:07 UTC

This piece of work is one of the most amazing one I have read since I am in the fandom. I love your writing, which is powerful, absolutely fabulous, and it has sent shivers down my spine as the words are wonderfully chosen.

The ending is beautiful and simple, with the right amount of emotion.

Loved, loved this.

sallyna_smile August 16 2009, 22:07:36 UTC

it's touching...
a beautiful piece *___*

vermontypython August 17 2009, 04:31:53 UTC

This is just...wow. Gorgeous. I have no other words for it.

archaeologist_d August 17 2009, 22:48:53 UTC

I liked how it could have been either one. Really nice imagery!

ladyreapermc September 12 2009, 15:49:03 UTC

this is so gorgeous!
you should write more fics! your writing is awesome!

needed_beauty September 12 2009, 16:50:03 UTC

Awws, really?

Thank you so so much!

:D