♥ Thanks! I'm so happy you've liked this (also, that you are NOT about to maul me for being so mean to the boys). I'm also glad that this flows well. I *hated* that I had to cut this in two, because it was too long for one single entry! I fear it'd ruin the flow and the mood both, but I just couldn't fit everything in one single post. *pouts* *pauses* *then smirks* If I want to think positive, and find someting positive about cutting the chappie in two posts, is the place where I stopped. You see, when I first started working on the chapter, I'd planned to end it wherr it says "He clutched Axl, grabbed Roll’s hand and turned. As he ran away, the sound of Blues’s last howl of pain trailed after him on red-hued wings." It was the perfect (if evil) place to stop, but I needed to add some more scenes. So I added them, even though I regretted having to ends the chapter at a less effective point. Now, even though the chapter *does* end later on, and on a less memorable lines, I also have a cliff-hanger *where* I wanted it, at least here on LJ. *giggles* Am I evil? :P
You are indeed, thoroughly rotten! *grins* But nt to worry about your secondary stopping place not being effective! Having Axl in the clutches of this 'unknown' makes for a very nice cliffie, as we have everyone else in a state of suspension, also. I can see the next chapter being over the top! *hugs again*
Thanks!
I'm so happy you've liked this (also, that you are NOT about to maul me for being so mean to the boys).
I'm also glad that this flows well. I *hated* that I had to cut this in two, because it was too long for one single entry! I fear it'd ruin the flow and the mood both, but I just couldn't fit everything in one single post.
*pouts*
*pauses*
*then smirks*
If I want to think positive, and find someting positive about cutting the chappie in two posts, is the place where I stopped.
You see, when I first started working on the chapter, I'd planned to end it wherr it says "He clutched Axl, grabbed Roll’s hand and turned. As he ran away, the sound of Blues’s last howl of pain trailed after him on red-hued wings."
It was the perfect (if evil) place to stop, but I needed to add some more scenes. So I added them, even though I regretted having to ends the chapter at a less effective point.
Now, even though the chapter *does* end later on, and on a less memorable lines, I also have a cliff-hanger *where* I wanted it, at least here on LJ.
*giggles*
Am I evil? :P
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