Comments | nebula99: FIC: Thunderbolts and Sparks

nebula99

FIC: Thunderbolts and Sparks - Part One

Jul 01, 2007 10:38

Title: Thunderbolts and Sparks
Author: nebula99
Fandom: Criminal Minds
Pairing: Hotch/Reid
Rating: TV-M
Taboos: Bondage, Banging the Boss
Additional Warnings: Spoilers for Revelations
Prompt: It might have been a while since you've been loved like you should be loved for the 2007 ficathon of
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slash, hotch/reid, cm, frao, fic, challenge

Comments 9

decarnin July 4 2007, 01:39:22 UTC

trying to think about motor racing, or vacuuming.

LOL!

Oo, the handcuff stuff is so wonderful, bruises, LICKING the bruises... and utterly cute use of Spencer's sleeve-watch!

While he had his suit on, he was still SSA Hotchner, Unit Chief, and getting a blow job while still in FBI costume was deliciously taboo.

Oh hotness.

Hotch had enjoyed domination games for a long time and he knew how to be rough and how to be controlling without inflicting damage.

*whimper*

Oh man, I forgot, Reid is afraid of the dark! That's *wonderful*! Brilliant!

Reid then wrapped his arms and legs around him like a baby monkey.

Awww!

He looked expectantly at Hotch and held out his arms,

What, now?

cuff links in his open palm.

Yep, you really got me with that one! It's darling!

It’s part of me, part of who I am.

Right on, Reid!

argh -- damn LJ that makes us break things in two! :-) This is really great -- I think it's the best thing of yours I've read so far. Course that could just be my kinks talking. *g*

nebula99 July 4 2007, 16:54:51 UTC

Thank you so much - I enjoyed writing this one and I'm so pleased that you liked it. Glad you liked the cuff links.

And I guess we share a kink or two . . .

cheshire_monkey July 9 2007, 15:06:13 UTC

I'm not familiar with your fandom, but I saw your post to 10_cliche_fics and had to come tell you how I squeed when I read your title (I love Nick Cave and all I could think of was "Straight to You" seeing the title).

I read this part and I think it's really good. Obviously, I don't know the characters, but your fic gives enough clues to really understand them and it made the fic easy to follow. =D

nebula99 July 9 2007, 16:55:46 UTC

Thanks for stopping by.

I totally get the Nick Cave love - "Straight to You" is one of my favourite songs and just seemed to fit this story. The quote from the song is at the end of Part Two.

I'm glad you enjoyed the fic - and that the characters made sense. Cheers!

O,O the_oke July 28 2007, 07:24:46 UTC

Awee, I liked it very much! Such a nice, angsty story! Can't wait for part two! And I really loved the 'freaky geek' comment! *rofl*
Yours GB

Re: O,O nebula99 July 28 2007, 20:53:45 UTC

thank you and I'm really pleased that you liked it. Hope you enjoy part two!

omg yeah! 11889429 September 1 2007, 22:46:50 UTC

Geez...wonderful...gonna read part 2 now. I have been saving it for tonight. :c) I love nick cave too. wow. sheesh...sorry finding it hard to feel intelligent right now.

Re: omg yeah! nebula99 September 3 2007, 14:12:01 UTC

thank you - I'm chuffed that you enjoyed it and hurrah! for Sir Nicholas of Cave.

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nebula99 January 23 2010, 22:44:00 UTC

Thank you so much - I like this one too! Glad you enjoyed.