[FIC] LOVE SO BITTERSWEET

[quartered]

title: Love So Bittersweet
fandom/pairing: JE/various (when i say various, i mean various)
rating: PG-13
word count: 3422
notes: thank you to all who commented on the first chapter, it relieved me to have so many people enjoying my take on the lovely shoujo manga. :D also, i would just iike to say that my choice of characters should not be taken to

Comments

[ika_rasu]

OH FUCK YES FIIIIRST! reading now.♥

[quartered]

lol okay ♥

[miss_jelly]

I so want to keysmash to this chapter, but I will refrain. So cute! The chapter ending sticks itself to my heart, it's so cute. Ah, I'm really looking forward to more

[quartered]

aaww happy :)♥ thanks for taking the time to read and comment! :)

[gemplee]

yes! love it. can't wait for more! thank you!

[quartered]

:D!! aaa, thank you as well for taking the time to read and comment! :)

[jonna594]

I enjoy this story way too much :)

[quartered]

:D♥!! aaa happy. thank you for reading and commenting! :)

[yuaelt]

hi, it's the whinney oba-chan ;)

I like your style and your choice of the characters quite a lot and I think you're capable of writing some very good fanfiction. Therefore, I'd like to ask why do you hold to the original so badly? I understand that it is supposed to be JE version of Hana Yori Dango with your cast. However, I doubt anyone who doesn't know the story would read it, and so shortly ONLY the cast is left interesting.

It's obvious that you put some work into this fic, why not change a thing or two (after all you made Makino a boy and played nice with the dress motive, although personally I'd argue about waking up to a dozen of masseurs being any bad :P ) and make the whole thing worth careful reading? :) I must admit I only skimmed through the second part :/

[quartered]

hello! first of all, thanks for leaving this comment. :) i have to admit that AUs are not my forte at all. i do not trust myself to come up with something that can surpass the original. while writing this chapter, i was thinking that maybe i could add some extra scenes. in the end i didn't include any because i thought they weren't any good. that is why the story is heavily based on the original.

as for the other chapters though, there are definitely some changes since Makino is a boy after all. thanks for pointing this out again, and i hope you'll like the next one better. :)