So tired but I must read and comment on your fics before I pass out. So these ones are gonna be bullet point style.
Favorite Line: "Look at that, how can you resist that?! Honestly, if I didn't know for a fact I came from you I'd wonder how the hell I'd gotten into some stranger's head."
Favorite Technical Thing you did: Peter's thoughts in underline. The emphasis was fun.
Favorite thing you do consistently: Of course the back and forth between Sylar and Brei. And Brei's extreme discomfort with germs and filth.
Moment I went AhhhGuhhh but keep reading cause it's awesome: Up his nose....OMG! It went up his nose.
Moment I wanted to hug Sylar (because that happens at least once in everyone of your fics): The oddly intense moment when he smudges Peter's lipstick. It was weird but I felt like he wanted to connect with Pete. Like he really loves him. Oh and the "You owe me" moment. And letting Brei comfort Pete instead of gloating or abusing him he just kind of settled back in a cute afterglow calm.
I figured jizz up the nose would be pretty foul. It just smells so gross. And I'm trying to show that Sylar really does love Peter and wants to be there with him, even if he gets frustrated. I'm glad you picked up on it.
And for some reason I just really like that look. I saw it once in a music video and I was like 'that looks...oddly erotic.'
*sigh* LOVE the eyebrow line.Best thing ever. I know you are turning these out super fast. Do you need a beta? I have caught a few small errors. If you want me to take a look at anything, I would be happy to do so. :-) Then I can read early!
I'd love a beta but I usually write these at like 9pm the night before they're suppose to be up. If you're willing to be my Beta when the advent calendar is over that'd be awesome. I plan on continuing this series with at least two fics a week when Dec. ends.
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Favorite Line: "Look at that, how can you resist that?! Honestly, if I didn't know for a fact I came from you I'd wonder how the hell I'd gotten into some stranger's head."
Favorite Technical Thing you did: Peter's thoughts in underline. The emphasis was fun.
Favorite thing you do consistently: Of course the back and forth between Sylar and Brei. And Brei's extreme discomfort with germs and filth.
Moment I went AhhhGuhhh but keep reading cause it's awesome: Up his nose....OMG! It went up his nose.
Moment I wanted to hug Sylar (because that happens at least once in everyone of your fics): The oddly intense moment when he smudges Peter's lipstick. It was weird but I felt like he wanted to connect with Pete. Like he really loves him. Oh and the "You owe me" moment. And letting Brei comfort Pete instead of gloating or abusing him he just kind of settled back in a cute afterglow calm.
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I figured jizz up the nose would be pretty foul. It just smells so gross. And I'm trying to show that Sylar really does love Peter and wants to be there with him, even if he gets frustrated. I'm glad you picked up on it.
And for some reason I just really like that look. I saw it once in a music video and I was like 'that looks...oddly erotic.'
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