I like this...I'm adding the ticking sounds to my own personal canon. Also I love how even taking Sylar's ability it takes Peter three nights to figure it out. Peter just cannot master abilities as quick as Sylar no matter what he does. And also also, I liked the Emma shout out. It didn't feel like bashing to me. Her power is very beautiful and it added a nice tone and emphasis to the piece. *claps* Excellent work!
The ticking is a very interesting idea! I agree, I like that Peter had to work with the ability for several nights before he realized what he was doing.
I read this last night after pulling two all-nighters in a row and then writing 11 pages of molecular biology homework. At the time, I *thought* I had an amazingly complex comment to give you, and I'd have the energy today to write it out. When I got around to write this out, I realized that my comment boiled down to this:
"Ticking is hot."
There was also this whole thing me having no idea what Zailo is (and the subsequent googling that resulted in learning the actors' names...) and then I realized something important.
Zachary is HOT. Milo is SMEXY. And that's not the same as Sylar, Gabriel, or Peter. In my head I had always separated Gabriel and Sylar, but not Zachary with his characters. What kind of dork am I?
~Kei A year late to the party but enjoying it all the same.
Comments 5
Reply
Reply
I agree, I like that Peter had to work with the ability for several nights before he realized what he was doing.
Reply
Reply
"Ticking is hot."
There was also this whole thing me having no idea what Zailo is (and the subsequent googling that resulted in learning the actors' names...) and then I realized something important.
Zachary is HOT. Milo is SMEXY. And that's not the same as Sylar, Gabriel, or Peter. In my head I had always separated Gabriel and Sylar, but not Zachary with his characters. What kind of dork am I?
~Kei
A year late to the party
but enjoying it all the same.
Reply
Leave a comment