A Cry for Help Part 11B

May 19, 2009 12:15


Here's the second half.

Jethro Gibbs turned off the main highway onto the two lane road that would lead them to Stillwater.  He should be at the hospital in a little over an hour where he would hopefully find out exactly what was going on with DiNozzo.  The team leader was well aware of the fact that his usual gruff tactics wouldn’t work this ( Read more... )

father/son, category:drama, character: tony dinozzo, author: ncismom, genre: gen, character: jethro gibbs, angst

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grey853 May 19 2009, 17:03:20 UTC
Another great addition. I'm looking forward to the new chapters. Thanks.

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mamapranayama May 19 2009, 17:34:14 UTC
Thanks for another great chapter. Update soon, please. :D

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murgy31 May 19 2009, 19:37:02 UTC
Thanks for the chapter. I can't wait to find out what happens.

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sa3466996 June 13 2009, 14:57:16 UTC
Loved the tension in the flashback scene and also like the pace with which you're dropping hints of what happened between Vance and Tony into the story. Just enough to move the story on but without drawing it out or throwing everything in at once.

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