This is the final part of the impromptu round robin, I do hope that I have done justice to the previous parts, and that you are happy with how I have ended it. I have tried to pick up on snippets from them all of the other chapters. If anyone has missed the previous parts they can be found here:
Noticing. Although it has been suggested, the other
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You know the ncis_flashfic challenge is 'discriminate?'
I love this chapter. You did a wonderful job of tying up the loose ends and bringing the story to a close. In fact, I think all the authors can be proud of this work. But this chapter is out-of-the-world great!
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Thank you so much. I'm really pleased that you thought it worked so well and tied everything up. That's a relief.
Indeed all the authors can be proud of themselves.
Thank you so much for your praise.
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I'm already had people ask when the next round robin starts. What have we created here?
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I've made a post about round robins and included a poll.
It certainly was great fun to do.
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I loved this line "She sees my beloved as a surrogate father. Mmm, now would that make me her surrogate mother?"
It's just a fantastic simple line that shows how a person's mind can wander, and the sense of humor Ducky holds. A person's mind is a confusing place to be in, and one can get lost, but here you keep it orgainized and simple to get off track (As we as humans do) but easily get back again.
I loved both of their pov's wonderful :)
Just a slight typo "God, I need another coffee?" The question mark. Hee hee, it's a great line and so very Gibbs like, His coffee adiction is so fun.
THank you so much for sharing this story.
*hearts and loves*
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"She sees my beloved as a surrogate father. Mmm, now would that make me her surrogate mother?"
:-) Thank you. I'm glad you enjoyed this line.
Oh, yes, a person's mind is indeed a confusing place to be. I'm glad that Ducky came over as getting off track, but also getting back on it again.
I loved both of their pov's wonderful
Thank you. I am glad.
Just a slight typo "God, I need another coffee?"
Thank you. Is now duly fixed.
His coffee adiction is so fun.
It is indeed.
Thank you for reading and commenting.
::Hugs::
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There are so many favourite lines that I won't even start to repeat them!
Woohoo!
*applauds*
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I'm glad that you enjoyed it so much.
::Hugs::
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As for the end, Nikki, you outdid yourself! It's perfect, really. I love the way the two lovebirds summarise their suspicions and thoughts about the crew in here, including Ren's unique character! Uncanny how their thoughts run as parallel as they do. Then again, great minds think alike, no? ^-^
{heart}
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As for the end, Nikki, you outdid yourself! It's perfect, really. I love the way the two lovebirds summarise their suspicions and thoughts about the crew in here, including Ren's unique character! Uncanny how their thoughts run as parallel as they do. Then again, great minds think alike, no?
Thank you so much. I'm really pleased to hear this. And indeed I had to try and get Ren's unique character in, I'm glad it fitted so well. Great minds do indeed think alike.
Thank you.
Hey, I see you've turned your animation into a virtually static graphic for an icon. It looks great!
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The series has been a blast to read. Nice round up, Nikki.
Now...*cracking bullwhip* get to those essays, my dear...sigh
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Ducking from the bullwhip. Eeek.
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Will me really wanting to see those essays help you get them done faster????
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::Giggle::
Will me really wanting to see those essays help you get them done faster????
:-) Ah, an incentive.
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