Fiction. Vance's Fault

Mar 16, 2009 13:15

TITLE: Vance's Fault
AUTHOR: Ashleigh Anpilova
PAIRING: Leroy Jethro Gibbs/Donald 'Ducky' Mallard
GENRE: Slash
SUB-GENRE: First Time
SUMMARY: A sequel to Now You Do. Vance gets his own way. However, he could not possibly have foreseen what his decision was going to lead to.
RATING: PG-13
WORD COUNT: 10,232
AUTHOR'S NOTE: Written for Challenge 39 ( Read more... )

!creator: nakeisha, challenge 39, fiction

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jumpfall March 16 2009, 14:33:01 UTC
*g*

I like to think this is perfect karma for Vance and his machinations.

The entire fic was just lovely, but some of my favourite bits:
- Tony offering to send Ziva to assasinate Vance
- Palmer fired up, ready to offer his resignation (oh, Jimmy!)
- Tony remembering the Mighty Mouse stapler
- McGee's increased techno-babble for Vance (and Gibbs' suggestion that he might even be making some of it up)
- Gibbs wondering if McGee had done any actual NCIS work a month (the picture was just lovely)

... I'll stop there before I start quoting everything, but really enjoyed this fic. =)

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nakeisha March 16 2009, 15:56:46 UTC
*Chuckles*

Oh, thank you so much for reading this and I'm really pleased to hear you enjoyed it.

And thank you for picking some of your favourite parts, they were some of mine too. I could picture Tony offering Ziva's 'services'.

Jimmy is so loyal.

Ah, the stapler :-)

Tim is Gibbs's - no question about it.

I figured given their respective skills Abby and Tim certainly could put together a wonderful picture.

Thank you again.

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sharpiesgal March 16 2009, 16:02:54 UTC
*chuckles*

I see Five and Six have taught this bunny well.

I truly enjoyed this story.

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nakeisha March 16 2009, 16:10:06 UTC
Oh, yes. That they have.

Aww, thank you so much.

I'm really glad you enjoyed it.

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ashley_pitt March 17 2009, 03:10:51 UTC
oh-ho....Gibbs and Ducky spoiled your fun Vance...

actually, the whole team helped.

and, omg....so many hair kisses and ear kisses and nose kisses...

*waves weakly from floor after mega-swoon*

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nakeisha March 17 2009, 09:49:19 UTC
Hee. They did at that.

Oh, yes.

*Smiles* I know you love those.

Thank you very much. I'm glad you enjoyed this.

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murgy31 March 17 2009, 04:00:06 UTC
That was a perfect story!

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nakeisha March 17 2009, 09:49:36 UTC
Thank you very much indeed.

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birggitt March 18 2009, 00:30:27 UTC
Oh, my! This story is for me! It has EVERYTHING! EVERYTHING!!!!
It has team-love, and Duck/Gibbs love. It has loyal Timmy and Gibbs knowing how loyal he is. And Vance got his ass kicked, HA!
It's filled with Ducky love, and oh my goodness! Tony offering Ziva as a mysterious assassin *laughs* And grown-up Tony. As I always knew he could be!
And a bossy Ducky!
And Ducky taking the initiative!!
And it's first time!
And Jethro is moving with Ducky!!!
And... oh, my! Maybe later I would be able to do a more coherent comment, but know? I'm too delighted to be rational :)
Thank you, thank you, thank you!!!
*hugs you, and twirls yous and dances with you*

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nakeisha March 18 2009, 13:21:04 UTC
*Smiles* I take it you liked this :-)

Thank you so very much indeed. I'm really chuffed by how much you enjoyed this and how you say for you it has everything.

Team-love story sums it up so very well. They do love one another *nods* Of course Gibbs knows how loyal Tim is, now we just need Tim to realise it. And Vance only has himself to blame *g*

Hee. And you know you could see Ziva doing it - well maybe the threatening. And indeed Tony can grow up. Which is why I really, seriously, feel if he gets his own team it can't be in DC with Gibbs in the same room. Or he'll go on being the Tony we see now.
Ducky can be bossy.
And indeed - I know you like Ducky taking the lead, I actually had you in mind when I wrote that part.
It is indeed FT
But of course - at their age *g* it's pointless messing around.

*Beams happily* You sounded perfectly rationale to me, my friend.

Thank you so much.

*Joins in hugs and twirls and dancing*

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