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Fiction. I'll Be Around

May 19, 2007 16:01

Moving away, for the moment at least, from my Discovering story in order to post the challenge of the month story. This isn't the story I started out to write for this challenge, but as said story is current standing at 30,000 words and isn't finished, and my m-i-l arrives at the end of the week to spend a few days with us, I thought I'd write a ( Read more... )

challenge 17, !creator: nakeisha, fiction

Comments 15

toomuchfandom May 19 2007, 16:05:48 UTC

HA!

absolutely brilliant:D

I'm still thinking of what I'm going to do with this challenge.

nakeisha May 19 2007, 16:14:32 UTC

Thank you.

I thought it was a bit of fun really.

I'm glad it worked.

I'm missing my Anita fix!

toomuchfandom May 19 2007, 16:16:25 UTC

Yeah well..

Anita is still struggling with the MFU AU fic (30.000 + words) and the AU Doctor Who fic (5000 words) which only grows and grows.

LOL.

erehwon6 May 19 2007, 16:47:52 UTC

A very novel idea, I like it :)
All round brilliant, the ending is so sweet. I like how it went full circle with the team.

nakeisha May 19 2007, 16:55:27 UTC

Thank you. I'm so glad to hear that.

And I'm really pleased that it worked.

He was so patient, he needed to have a sweet, happy ending. I'm glad you liked the full circle with the team.

Thank you.

erehwon6 May 19 2007, 17:33:25 UTC

You're welcome :)
Aww I know, so sweet. Even with the roles changed they were still 'them'.

nakeisha May 20 2007, 08:28:37 UTC

That is good to know. Thank you.

sharpiesgal May 19 2007, 19:09:47 UTC

Interesting twist, my dear.

I really liked this story.

We both know how patient Jethro can be and the same can be said of Ducky as well.

*hugs*

nakeisha May 20 2007, 08:27:45 UTC

Thank you, Chris.

I'm glad that you enjoyed it and found it interesting.

Oh, yes, they can both be patient men when they want to be. Jethro just isn't all that often ;-)

*Hugs*

ahavia May 19 2007, 19:38:04 UTC

I was intersting how uncomfortable I was with the switch. I can see Gibbs do this over and over but it is hard for me to see Ducky doing this to Gibbs. So I was happy with the ending.
Ahavia

nakeisha May 20 2007, 08:28:18 UTC

I'm sorry that it made you uncomfortable, I really am.

But I'm glad you liked the ending.

kalliekat May 20 2007, 08:45:03 UTC

a part of me likes it better this way round......they are still "them" and i know cannon or is it canon? is Gibbs as the womaniser, but there's just something. and i love the song. oh yes. i definitely like it.

nakeisha May 20 2007, 10:23:47 UTC

Thank you, Kallie. I'm glad that you enjoyed it. And that you saw it was still 'them'.

It's canon in the way you're using it. Cannon is the thing that fires.

I'm glad it worked.

It was the song that wrote the story. I was listen to one of my Carly Simon CDs Torch and this song screamed G/D. Initially it screamed it the canon way round, but then suddenly . . . What can I say? I blame Evil Bob 6.

BTW, you might want to check out my 20_est_relships as someone is posting your other couple - Gibbs/Abby. This is the link to the tag where her stories will be: http://community.livejournal.com/20_est_relships/tag/tinga13:+ncis:+gibbs/abby