Fiction. Getting Rid Of Madam Director

Apr 14, 2007 15:25

Some of you may have read this, in its Gen form, as part of periwinkle27's 'Madam Director' round robin. I've made some changes to it, and basically made it a mild slash story.

My thanks to toomuchfandom for allowing me to use her idea in respect of Abby; and also to periwinkle27 for giving me permission to change and post my part of the story as a stand alone story.

TITLE: Getting ( Read more... )

!creator: nakeisha, fiction

Leave a comment

Comments 10

erehwon6 April 14 2007, 16:16:58 UTC
Excellent :)

You really do get a sense of the frustration brewing. Abby's way of thinking is almost childlike, with her loyalties and dogmatic approach (which is part of her charm). You've got that across very well, without making it OOC or childish, which is a difficult thing to do.

Aww the bits with Gibbs/Ducky are sweet.

Ducky's reactions are very understandable, the daydream part was a nice touch, but of course he wouldn't harm anyone like that.

LOL I like that Gibbs considered offing Jenny, really don't blame him.

Reply

nakeisha April 14 2007, 16:34:22 UTC
Thank you so much, Sage.

I'm really pleased to hear that I managed to get Abby's thinking and approach right. I'm glad it came over well; she can be quite difficult to balance at time.

Even in Autopsy they can be sweet.

Thank you. That was a little bit from Peri's original idea when she started the round robin, but she had Ducky using Jenn as target practice :-) not for real, naturally. Of course he wouldn't do it, he's far too nice.

Thank you. I don't blame him either; although he might want to off Mann as well :-)

Reply

erehwon6 April 14 2007, 17:59:58 UTC
You're welcome :)

I know, it is very easy to slip up with such a distinct 'voice'.

They're always sweet.

Hmm yes I can imagine that. He is of course far too nice.

LOL oh yes, I should imagine so.

Reply

nakeisha April 15 2007, 10:22:37 UTC
It is indeed.

Oh, yes, they are.

He is. *Shakes head at times*

:-)

Reply


periwinkle27 April 14 2007, 17:38:03 UTC
Here's a coincidence for you -- I just started the next chapter of the Round Robin!

Reply

nakeisha April 15 2007, 09:33:29 UTC
Spooky! :-)

Reply


sharpiesgal April 14 2007, 17:38:49 UTC
I remember reading part of this bunny.

I say let Abby off the witch.

Reply

nakeisha April 15 2007, 09:33:56 UTC
*Giggle*

Maybe she could off Mann as well :-)

Reply

kalliekat April 15 2007, 14:44:43 UTC
Now THAT NIkki is an excellent idea ;-)
lovely piece, and i can quite understand Abby's frustration. i was kind of hoping that Ducky wouldn't let her do it because he had his own oidea, but is suppose he is really too nice *sighs heavily*
oh, and thankyou for the CD my dear, not watched yet my off weekend went pear shaped, but next weekend.... *grins*

Reply

nakeisha April 16 2007, 12:14:18 UTC
We'll see what Evil Bob 6 can come up with; he rather likes the idea, so. . .

Yes, Ducky really is too nice *sigh*

You're welcome. I'm glad it found its way down there safely.

Reply


Leave a comment

Up