My first NCIS fic

[xanfan27]

Hello all, I just finished my first NCIS fic. I've been writing in Buffy for several months and I finally worked up the nerve to write NCIS. I had my regular beta reader go over it and she did an awesome job with grammer and structure and everything, she even tried to help with chracterization, but she doesn't know NCIS from CSI, seriously. And I was wondering if someone would be willing to give it a read through for me. Just a warning it is Slash.

Thanks,
Xanfan