I can't believe this was an actual book
Dear Ms. Meyer,
No offence, but you really should have quit while you were ahead. Not that I blame you-- in your place, I'm sure I would milk it for all it's worth too. However, when your plot is nearly identical to a torchwood episode... it should be a sign. A sign to stop the crack. However, that was okay; if it was just that, ridiculous as it is, I think I could have taken it. Ms. Meyer, enough is as good as a feast. It was when you CONTINUED to make your story even more insane and soap opera-y that you really lost me. I know 14 year-olds who know and write better.
However, I won't deny that your book was amusing. I just don't think it was in the way you meant it to be.
Sam
In other news, my job sucks and my house is currently a mess cause we're putting in new floors. But, fear not! For there is only one more month left before I go back to school!!!!!!!!!!!!
No offence, but you really should have quit while you were ahead. Not that I blame you-- in your place, I'm sure I would milk it for all it's worth too. However, when your plot is nearly identical to a torchwood episode... it should be a sign. A sign to stop the crack. However, that was okay; if it was just that, ridiculous as it is, I think I could have taken it. Ms. Meyer, enough is as good as a feast. It was when you CONTINUED to make your story even more insane and soap opera-y that you really lost me. I know 14 year-olds who know and write better.
However, I won't deny that your book was amusing. I just don't think it was in the way you meant it to be.
Sam
In other news, my job sucks and my house is currently a mess cause we're putting in new floors. But, fear not! For there is only one more month left before I go back to school!!!!!!!!!!!!