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Try Three

Nov 24, 2012 19:06

Title: Try Three
Author: corycides
Fandom: NBC's Revolution
Rating: NC 17
Characters: Rachel Matheson, Sebastian Monroe
Pairing(s): Rachel Matheson/Sebastian Monroe
Contains: Sex, swearing, dub-con due to power differential
Prompt(s): General Monroe is certain that one of the Matheson children is his. He hates that Rachel won't admit it
Summary: Rachel used to like ( Read more... )

(g): smut, (l): multi-chapter, (p): rachel/monroe, (fw): fanfic, (c): rachel matheson

Comments 2

mustbethursday3 November 25 2012, 01:56:55 UTC

I feel like I should join a support group for how much I love this fic/Ship - there's obviously something wrong with me.

It was hot, it was - my gods, your dialogue is perfect...probably the best I've seen in this fandom. So jealous. And it was real, I could see the two of them sliding into each other's orbits. LOVED, LOVED, LOVED the first part/time being about the enlisting. The second part had this lovely bittersweet nature to it - the hair thing, omg. Coz yes. And you made me believe that maybe this could have happened - before, I couldn't really imagine it.

And the third part, that one's my favorite. I love that she's in the room at that time. In pajamas and no shoes no less (perfect). And tries to argue with him (And Jeremy even kinda looks at her - do you know how much I would love Jeremy and Rachel having a rapport? Anything, even looks of acknowledgment would be enough) and then it's the beginning of Bass & Rachel's dynamic now - all: attacks and threats ( ... )

corycides November 25 2012, 23:02:40 UTC

Hi,

I only started using AO3 - I take yays where I can get them!

Thanks, and I love Rachel/Bass - they are my go to ship for Revolution. It is actually one of the few times I ship something that is only a bit 'wrong' and not the 'wrongest' thing on the show :)

I had loads of fun writing Try Three.