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carlier36 August 22 2014, 05:01:34 UTC
Roadside Crosses | Miles, Bass, Rachel, Charlie (no obvious ships) | Eulogy | PG-13 | Major character deaths, Future!fic, Terribly depressing

People don't really get headstones anymore, with nice things carved into stone about them. They barely get funerals, just bare bones eulogies mumbled over a simple wooden cross and a mound of fresh dirt before mourners scurry on to the next pointless stop in an unending road trip, criss-crossing the countryside. In search of the one place where the memories of the days before the Blackout aren't so potent, where life can start new and untainted.

It doesn’t exist.Scattered along the overgrown highways and deserted towns of North America, there are a half dozen or more such crosses belonging to one unfortunate family, battered by the elements and bent this way and that by years of neglect. There is nothing to note who the people rotting beneath those crosses were, what they did for the world, or to it ( ... )

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jaq_of_spades August 22 2014, 07:37:44 UTC
*bursts into tears*

That is just brutal. And shouldn't be allowed. That last line!

So very painful, and perfect.

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carlier36 August 22 2014, 15:09:31 UTC
Awww - sorry for tears!! But thank you - I wasn't as happy with this one so I'm glad it was still a tearjerker. As much as I'd like to think these bbs would get some roundabout happy endings, this is probably closer to the truth. Poor darlings! *clings to them*

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ivy_b August 22 2014, 15:44:31 UTC
I love how cruel you are, because this was just perfect and from the get go I felt like it was Miles' voice and I loved the headstones for everyone.

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carlier36 August 22 2014, 16:39:58 UTC
Haha, I DO have a cruel streak. :P Thanks hon! I don't write in Miles' voice very often so it's awesome that you could tell!

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ivy_b August 22 2014, 16:44:03 UTC
You have a cruel streak just like Rachel *g* (and it makes me love you even more) I liked your Miles' voice, you should write in it more often *hint hint*

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carlier36 August 22 2014, 16:54:44 UTC
You have a cruel streak just like Rachel *g* (and it makes me love you even more)

Hahahaha you SO know the way to my heart. :P Love you too! *snugs*

I liked your Miles' voice, you should write in it more often *hint hint*

I should, huh? Well I probably still have a few prompt fills in me, so we'll see. ;P

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ivy_b August 22 2014, 18:11:35 UTC
Hahahaha you SO know the way to my heart

Yup, it's through your rib cage. *g* *snuggles*

I should, huh? Well I probably still have a few prompt fills in me, so we'll see. ;P

Go for it! I think I'm all our of prompts at the moment, but I always say these things and then Thursday laughs at me when I end up writing more.

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hithelleth August 23 2014, 09:14:36 UTC
Oh, wow, thanks. Something must have fallen in my eyes, there are no tears, nope.

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mustbethursday3 August 26 2014, 11:11:07 UTC
Added :)

And the award for angst-iest ficlet on the post goes to...

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