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[jaq_of_spades]

Hello God, it's me, Miles|Miles| Austin| M |

It all turns to shit, after Austin.

Not that it wasn't shit before then, but they'd still had hope. They'd still had Charlie. And they'd been a team, a halfway good one, him and Bass and Charlie and even the annoying junior leaguers who, fuck it all, had been worth somethingAnd now, Neville junior is dead, and Charlie's a dead-eyed mess, and he's stuck in fucking basement, being taunted by a sickeningly cute kitten poster. Shit happens, yeah, and he knows he's shit human being, but did he really deserve this

[carlier36]

Ooooh, I LOVE this line so much: But Charlie loved harder than anyone he knew, yet had still been able to put a bullet into the kid she'd mooned over for months. Her mother's daughter, that one.

Awesome character insight on both Rachel and Charlie.

[jaq_of_spades]

Thank you! I think the fact that Charlie had such a loving heart was what made the Jason incident so very awful in the first place. And Bass is a pretty good judge of character - he was right about Charlie all along :D

[ivy_b]

I love your Miles!voice and his musings, especially about Charlie and her capacity to love, but being her mother's daughter.

[mustbethursday3]

Added :)

they'd been a team, a halfway good one, him and Bass and Charlie and even the annoying junior leaguers who, fuck it all, had been worth something.

^^ I love this line. Junior Leaguers :P