The Four Winds, Chapter Sixteen

[nauticalgal]

Our Heroes go from the frying pan to the fire, in the space of a single chapter.

Comments

[fragrantwoods]

I only got as far as Badger before I had to stop for RL, but oh, your Badger voice and my love for Badger and Mark Sheppard is jumping off the scale. IOU a better comment when I can sit down and properly read, but damn, you had me at Badger and "your little duck" :-)

[nauticalgal]

Thanks :-)

[fragrantwoods]

Very nicely done. I like the idea that the Blue Sun weapon has diminishing (but still hurting) effects with distance.

I enjoyed Frank, the "can't get a word in edgewise" guy :-)

And River's flashback...aww.

[nauticalgal]

Oops, I need to fix the formatting on the flashback.

Thanks for the kind words! Comments like these are how fanfic writers get paid :-)