Fanfiction Master List
Those of you who are just here for the icons can ignore this. =) I've just been being creative in other ways lately and I wanted to have a little archive to keep things straight. Currently this is all fanfiction, and currently all of the fanfiction is Tin Man!
( Tin Man )
( Tin Man )
This was actually difficult to get started. The first think I have written is "Azkadellia" but then that's crossed out. As you've seen in the final draft, I go with "The Sorceress" instead. There are several similar cross outs as well, because I find that in this situation "Azkadellia" is a bit ambiguous. I wanted a clear distinction between the real Azkadellia and the witch. So when Azkadellia is possessed by the witch, she is Azkadellia by name, but she's Azkadellia; The Sorceress. Not the girl. I hope that's not too confusing! XD I wanted to give the two distinct feelings so you would know automatically who was who by the end without me having to clarify.
I have a line crossed out after "the girl" wants to see him "smile proudly at her" where the witch thinks all she wants to see in him "was terror, and she knew if he woke she would get her wish." But that was kind of clunky so I took it out, and later I had the witch tell the girl "The only expression you'll see on his face...is one of terror."
Right after that is where we get into the play between the two halves where like I said, I didn't say "said the witch" or "said the girl", I wanted them to speak for themselves. I was afraid that it might not be very clear, and perhaps a bit trippy so I was hesitant to post the story at all!
When Azkadellia looks into his face and starts to cry; the "Oh, Ambrose," bit, I actually almost had her say "Ambrose, I'm so sorry," but I changed my mind. The emotion of just seeing him again, all she can get out is his name. I kind of love the image of the witch being so repulsed by this, she drops him like he's burned her. And the feeling of love (you decide what kind, haha, I'm so vague!) is just... absolutely repulsive to the witch.
Then Zero gets his moment in the sun. I actually watched part one again on Saturday and went "Oh, shit!" because DG is in fact conscious when it ends, but I figure she's a witch, she probably knocked her out. She also says in the episode "Take him," concerning Raw, but you don't see them actually do it, so she remind them towards the beginning to get the Viewer. (I love the line about how quickly they go through them. So casual.)
The last line was a bitch to write. There were probably 80 different versions before I actually wrote anything, but I wanted to get across that in my head Azkadellia didn't just stay 13 mentally, she did grow. I think that if I were to full out go Azkadellia/Glitch or Ambrose, she could NOT still be mentally 13 years old. But I digress- there were many versions of this line. The one that immediately comes to mind is "the girl who was no longer a girl, but now grown up" but that felt roundabout and clunky. I finally ended up with "he girl- no longer a girl, really, for she had grown up" which I'm happy with.
I hope that was informative! Any questions? =)
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Probably didn't help that I had a migraine before reading this.
It was information overload.
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