Fic: Ashes to Ashes
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Don't tell me she loved us more than anything. If she had, she wouldn't have left at all.
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It's hard, loving those who are no longer living in exactly the way they were loved when they stood, slept, and walked alongside you. There's no twelve step program for crawling out of the wreckage they make by leaving this life first, or any well-meant platitude in existence that actually soothes the empty ache.
The little things are forgotten first- exactly the way her sleep-mussed hair parted across the kitchen table in the rushed mornings before it's brushed, the correct shade of blue her eyes were and the way her handwriting slanted one way and before looping the other. Some days, the fact that they're even gone is forgotten, but then the hole in the world where they laughed, cried and dreamed rips itself back open with a silent scream, and there's no walling the truth of their absence back up behind the veil of sleep or ignorance of the fact again.
When she’s not here to share it, the actor in the movies that were her favorites doesn't seem quite as funny, and what photo albums that actually survived the war are too painful to open to snapshots of her sister vivacious, vibrant, alive. She changes the channel every time any songs that remotely remind her of her sister come on, and she never picks cookies and cream ice cream out at the grocery store anymore because there is no joy in the victory of scoring her own favorite flavor when there is no one to compare the merits of it verses butter pecan.
Rachel's will have been gone for two years next month, which is both no time at all and a gaping eternity of lost moments at the same time.
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Don't tell me she was a hero like the flowery words you're embellishing her with is some kind of compensation for her absence. Heroes from stories are supposed to be impenetrable, gifted, glowing with their successes. And everyone knows heroes are supposed to return triumphant on the wings of their daring deeds, not as a lifeless broken shell in a body bag that no one would let me say goodbye to.
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Everyone thought her sister was so freaking wonderful.
Everyone never had to wait for her to remember there are other people in the house who might need to take a shower sometime before next week. Everyone never endured years of awkward family meals Rachel showed up to but barely participated in before disappearing off with her weird friends again. Everyone never had the only publically memorable thing about their own existence be the fact that they're related to a dead girl.
And they certainly weren't standing next to Mom the day Rachel broke their mother's heart one final time by never coming home.
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Don't tell me I'm lucky to have ‘had’ her for a sister. If I was lucky, she would still be leaving her textbooks all over the kitchen counter, her clean clothes would be flopped unfolded in a hamper that takes up all the floor space in the laundry room, and her dirty dishes would still be piling up next to the sink because the dishwasher is an impossible two feet beyond it.
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Jordan systematically destroyed everything at the Hork Bajr valley camp ground that reminded her of Rachel the day after her sister died. It hadn't taken all that long; her sister hadn't been around enough to leave much trace of her life there.
At first she thought maybe she hated Rachel most for not staying with their family the night before she willingly died; hadn't she wanted to huddle under the thin covers with them one last time? Then she realized she resented Rachel even more for having the audacity to give her final gift, her life for the whole world- her family included- but her final goodbye to some formerly boy Rachel had only known for a few years.
Jordan had been her sister for over a decade. How could he have counted more?
But she was regrettably old enough to know she had to keep telling herself she hated Rachel because loving her sister's memory instead hurt so damn much.
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Don't tell me she had to go. There must have been another way.
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They burned her tragically heroic sister's broken body to dusty ashes and swept the charred, broken bones that were left into an ugly, tacky vase-like thing Rachel would have been appalled by.
When it unexpectedly happened, Jordan was glad her sister's boyfriend took the thing away. She never wanted to see it again, anyways.
There was simply no way to relate the Rachel who hogged the remote and never put the butter back in the fridge after she used it to the pathetic decoration displayed for the observation of the crowd of people behind her. Her sister didn't belong in an urn any more than she belonged in a shellacked box in the cold ground; Rachel belonged striding through the halls of a high school- that also should still be standing- like she owned the place, listening to God awful music in the bedroom next door, or in the front seat of the car she had tricked Jordan into giving her perpetual shotgun of years ago.
Mostly, Rachel doesn't belong being dead, being an it.
In spite of this glaringly obvious truth, Rachel and her stupid death belonged to all the gawking spectators pretending to grieve at the funeral. Her passing may have indirectly touched the murmuring, faceless crowd fanned out behind her family, but Jordan doubts that's why any of them are here; in her final act her sister became simply one more postcard piece of a history people wanted to be able to say that in some way they touched, like the dusty scrap from the Berlin wall her history teacher proudly displayed in class last year.
“So heartrending,” they whispered when they think Jordan wasn’t listening- or perhaps it doesn't dawn on any of them that she might be.
“That poor family…”
“…and so young, so beautiful”.
Adults would occasionally forget she and Sara were still standing there absorbing the Rachel’s final shockwaves now that the first official onslaught of bereaved relatives- most Jordan didn't remember having met before- and distant family friends they haven't seen in years has ebbed, and that the war hero's sisters could hear them.
“I can't imagine losing how much it would hurt to lose my own daughter like that.”
Frankly, Jordan couldn't have imagined this kind of grief the week before Rachel's death, either.
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Mostly, don't tell me she ‘changed the world’ like that was more important than being our sister.
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The sky overhead wasn't quite the blue of Rachel's eyes that day, and the rays of the sun weren't the correct golden tone to be like Rachel's hair; they certainly weren't as warm as Rachel's enveloping bear hugs used to be.
However, the cadence of her sister's laughter haunted her in the guise of the warm autumn wind that flipped and danced down the sidewalk beside Jordan when her family joined the sober procession leaving the service; the same wind whipped lost patience and whipped around in front of her at a slightly faster pace because it, like Rachel, always effortlessly seemed to get everywhere Jordan wanted to go first.
Written for anicomp's 'Love Under Fire' as chosen by the lovely rena_librarian- thanks for such an inspiring prompt honey! Nit-picks, suggestions and reactions are always welcome!